fix(env): review

Co-authored-by: eauvray-github <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Justine Sudraud <[email protected]>

Author: 3 people

environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/additional-content/environmental-footprint-calculator-estimation.mdx

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ The estimation is represented by three green leaf icons:
   - When only one leaf is dark green, the AZ has a bigger quantity of CO2e emitted per kW consumed
 
 <Message type="note">
-  When you hover your cursor over the leaves or when you select the AZ, you can see the detail of the environmental footprint estimation in kgCO₂e.
+  When you hover your cursor over the leaves or when you select the AZ, you can see the detail of the environmental footprint estimation in kgCO₂e/kw.
 </Message>
 
 <Message type="important">
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ The estimation is represented by three green leaf icons:
 
 ## Elastic Metal offers footprint estimation
 
-For Elastic Metal offers, the environmental footprint estimation considers the impact of the **manufacturing** and **use** of all the elements that allow the service to work, such as network, cross-IT equipment and stock, and non-IT elements, and the manufacturing and use of the server itself, for example. The AZ you chose in the previous step will impact the **use** by multiplying each kw consumed by each of these elements by the value indicated.
+For Elastic Metal offers, the environmental footprint estimation considers the impact of the **manufacturing** and **use** of all the elements that allow the service to work, such as network, cross-IT equipment and stock, and non-IT elements in addition to the manufacturing and use of the server itself. The AZ you chose in the previous step will impact the **use** by multiplying each kw consumed by each of these elements by the value indicated.
 
 <Message type="note">
   For a detailed report of how the environmental impact of Scaleway services is calculated, refer to the [Environmental Footprint calculator breakdown](/environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/additional-content/environmental-footprint-calculator) documentation page.

environmental-footprint/environmental-footprint/additional-content/environmental-footprint-calculator.mdx

@@ -151,7 +151,7 @@ To integrate this into the overall calculation, we will first get the total envi
 
 ### Water consumption
 
-Providing water consumption metrics is essential in the context of cloud services hosted in data centers because water plays a key role in cooling systems, which ensure the optimal operating temperatures for servers. The amount of water consumed depends on factors such as the temperature, humidity, and the design of the cooling system. For instance, in hot and dry climates, water consumption tends to be higher. At Scaleway we choose our data centers also taking this criterion into account to reduce water consumption as much as possible.
+Providing water consumption metrics is essential in the context of cloud services hosted in data centers because water plays a key role in cooling systems, which ensure the optimal operating temperatures for servers. The amount of water consumed depends on factors such as the temperature, humidity, and the design of the cooling system. For instance, in hot and dry climates, water consumption tends to be higher. At Scaleway, we choose our data centers also taking this criterion into account to reduce water consumption as much as possible.
 
 This data is availlable for:
 * FR-PAR-1