fix(efp): reviews

Co-authored-by: Rowena Jones <[email protected]>

Author: ldecarvalho-doc

pages/environmental-footprint/additional-content/environmental-footprint-calculator.mdx

@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ To accurately calculate the environmental impact of each server used directly fo
 
 Each product will have its own set of criteria to allocate the environmental footprint, considering factors such as server utilization rates, operational timeframes, and the specific technical requirements of the product. By customizing the allocation rules for each offering, we can ensure a more accurate and fair representation of the environmental impact associated with each product.
 
-You can find the specifications of calculation for each of the available products in the list below. Click on a product name to expand or collapse its details.
+You can find the calculation specifications for each of the available products in the list below. Click on a product name to expand or collapse its details.
 
 <Concept>
   #### Bare Metal
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ You can find the specifications of calculation for each of the available product
     - **Indirect Emissions**
         - Impact related to cross-functional services necessary to guarantee the operation of the Instance, such as network and shared storage.
 
-  When calculating the footprint of an Instance, you must distribute the resources according to their proportional consumption on the hypervisor:
+  When calculating an Instance's footprint, we consider the resources based on their relative usage on the hypervisor to ensure an accurate distribution of their proportional consumption.
 
   - **CPU** - Consider the share of vCPUs reserved compared to the total number of physical cores available.
   - **RAM** - Consider the share of allocated RAM compared to the total RAM of the hypervisor.