fix(rdb): review walter

Author: ldecarvalho-doc

pages/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/api-cli/logical-replication-as-subscriber.mdx

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 The logical replication of databases as a subscriber is available with [PostgreSQL 16](/managed-databases-for-postgresql-and-mysql/reference-content/pg-version-updates#postgresql-16), which is now supported in Scaleway's Managed Databases for PostgreSQL.
 
-The feature allows you to replicate data from one database to another in real-time, without having to replicate the entire database, and keep them in sync, without having to take the original database offline or lock it for an extended period.
+The feature allows you to replicate data from a non-managed database to a Managed Database for PostgreSQL in real-time, without having to replicate the entire database and keep them in sync, without having to take the original database offline or lock it for an extended period.
 
 <Message type="important">
   At Scaleway we use a public interface to connect to an external database, even when you use a private endpoint. The connection, however, is completely secure as all ports are closed and outgoing data is encrypted. Learn more in the [Limitations section](#limitations) of this page.
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ To be able to create a subscription, you must have the privileges of the `pg_cre
 
 When creating a subscription from a Scaleway Database Instance to a public IP, the public interface of the Database Instance node is used to connect to the publisher. This might incur in the following consequences:
 
-- If you only have a private endpoint, your Database Instance will still has a public management IP address. The ports are all closed, stopping all connections except the one with the publisher or subscriber database.
+- If you only have a private endpoint, your Database Instance will still have a public management IP address. The ports are all closed, stopping all connections except the one with the publisher database. All outgoing data is securely encrypted. 
 - If your Database Instance set-up is composed of more than one node, your IP address is subject to change. In case of failover, for example, the IP address connecting to the publisher database will change. We cannot predict the new IP your nodes might take one. However, you can use [Scaleway's Autonomous System](https://ipinfo.io/AS12876) to check the number (ASN) of your primary node's IP address, look up the IP address allocation for the ASN. This can help you predict the IP address of your failover nodes.
 - There is a limit to the number of subscriptions that can be created per Database Instance offer. You can find the table of maximum number of subscriptions per node type below.