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Author: nerda-codes

changelog/june2025/2025-06-20-elastic-metal-changed-ryzen-em-a610r-nvme-new-price.mdx

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-title: Ryzen EM-A610R-NVMe new price!
+title: Price drop for Ryzen EM-A610R-NVMe
 status: changed
 date: 2025-06-20
 category: bare-metal
@@ -10,5 +10,5 @@ The Ryzen offer EM-A610R-NVMe now comes with a reduced price:
 - Old price: €59.99/month
 - New price: €39.99/month
 
-Offer available in PAR-1 and PAR-2, soon in all regions.
+The offer is currently available in PAR-1 and PAR-2, and will soon be available in all regions.