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pages/apple-silicon/how-to/setup-vm-with-utm.mdx

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 This guide explains the process to create a fully independent and functional virtual machine inside a Scaleway Mac using UTM, a powerful virtualization tool for macOS.
-UTM is free and open-source software that leverages Apple's Hypervisor framework and QEMU to provide virtualization capabilities.
+UTM is a free and open-source software that leverages Apple's Hypervisor framework and QEMU to provide virtualization capabilities.
 
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@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ UTM is free and open-source software that leverages Apple's Hypervisor framework
             <Lightbox src="scaleway-aps-utm-2.webp" size="medium" alt="The disk size confgiration window of UTM with 64GB of storage chosen" />
         *   Click "Save" to create the VM.
         <Lightbox src="scaleway-aps-utm-3.webp" size="medium" alt="Summary of the VM configuration displaying the Save button to apply the configuration" />
-4.  Start and set Up your macOS VM:
+4.  Start and set up your macOS VM:
     *   Once the VM is installed with your properties, click the "Run" button in UTM.
     *   A GUI window will open displaying your VM.
         <Lightbox src="scaleway-aps-utm-4.webp" size="medium" alt="Mac OS setup wizard" />
@@ -77,4 +77,4 @@ UTM is free and open-source software that leverages Apple's Hypervisor framework
   For more advanced information about UTM, refer to the [official UTM documentation](https://docs.getutm.app/)
 </Message>
 
-This setup allows you to run a complete and isolated macOS environment within your Scaleway mac instance, perfect for testing applications, MDM profiles, or other macOS-specific tasks.
+This setup allows you to run a complete and isolated macOS environment within your Scaleway hosted Mac mini, perfect for testing applications, MDM profiles, or other macOS-specific tasks.

pages/apple-silicon/how-to/test-mdm-workflows.mdx

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 Scaleway's hosted Mac mini with UTM as a hypervisor provides a unique and powerful platform for testing and validating Mobile Device Management (MDM) solutions.
 
 This documentation guide is designed to help you get started with testing MDM automation and deployment workflows on a Scaleway Mac mini with UTM.
-It provides step-by-step instructions for enrolling a VM in an MDM server, testing MDM commands and deployment, and manually installing configuration profiles. Whether you're an MDM administrator, a developer, or a QA engineer.
+It provides step-by-step instructions for enrolling a VM in an MDM server, testing MDM commands and deployment, and manually installing configuration profiles. The documentation is suitable for MDM administrators, developers, or QA engineers.
 
 By following this guide, you will be able to create a robust and isolated testing environment for your MDM solution, allowing you to validate its functionality, performance, and scalability.
 
@@ -51,6 +51,6 @@ If needed, you can manually install a configuration profile on your VM:
 1. Download your configuration profile (`.mobileconfig` file) from your MDM provider.
 2. On your VM, go to **System Settings** > **General** > **Device Management**.
 3. Click the "+" button and select your profile.
-4.Follow the prompts to install and activate the profile.
+4. Follow the prompts to install and activate the profile.
 
 By following these steps, you should be able to successfully enroll your VM in your MDM server and test MDM commands and deployment.