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containers/kubernetes/how-to/manage-allowed-ips.mdx

@@ -13,13 +13,13 @@ categories:
   - containers
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-Restricting IPs on Kubernetes Kapsule or Kosmos clusters enhances security by limiting access to only trusted sources, thereby reducing the risk of unauthorized access and potential attacks.
-This control ensures that only specific IP addresses or networks can interact with your clusters, providing an additional layer of protection.
+Restricting IPs on Kubernetes Kapsule or Kosmos clusters enhances security by limiting access to only trusted sources. Since only IP addresses and networks specified by you can interact with your clusters, you reduce the risk of unauthorized access and potential attacks.
+
 The default entry `0.0.0.0/0` enables any host to establish a connection.
 
 <Macro id="requirements" />
 
-- Scaleway account logged into the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com)
+- A Scaleway account logged into the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com)
 - [Owner](/identity-and-access-management/iam/concepts/#owner) status or [IAM permissions](/identity-and-access-management/iam/concepts/#permission) allowing actions in the intended Organization
 - [Created](/containers/kubernetes/how-to/create-cluster) a Kubernetes Kapsule or Kosmos cluster
 
@@ -29,10 +29,10 @@ The default entry `0.0.0.0/0` enables any host to establish a connection.
 
 ## How to add an IP address
 
-1. Click **Kubernetes** in the **Containers** section of the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com). The **Kubernetes Kapsule dashboard** appears.
+1. Click **Kubernetes** in the **Containers** section of the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com). The **Kubernetes dashboard** appears.
 2. Select the cluster you wish to configure. The **Cluster information** page opens.
 3. Click the **Network** tab to display your cluster's network information. Your access control list appears in the **Allowed IPs for control plane** section.
-4. Click **Add allowed IP**. Enter the IP address or IP block in [CIDR notation](/network/ipam/concepts/#cidr-notation) (e.g., `198.51.100.135/32` for a single IP, `198.51.100.0/24` for an IP block) and click **Add IPs**.
+4. Click **Add allowed IP**. Enter the IP address or IP block in [CIDR notation](/network/ipam/concepts/#cidr-notation) (e.g., `198.51.100.135/32` for a single IP, `198.51.100.0/24` for an IP block), then click **Add IP(s)**.
    <Message type="note">
       To restore default settings and allow connections from all IPs, add `0.0.0.0/0` to the list.
    </Message>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ The default entry `0.0.0.0/0` enables any host to establish a connection.
 
 ## How to delete an IP address
 
-1. Click **Kubernetes** in the **Containers** section of the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com). The **Kubernetes Kapsule dashboard** appears.
+1. Click **Kubernetes** in the **Containers** section of the [Scaleway console](https://console.scaleway.com). The **Kubernetes dashboard** appears.
 2. Select the cluster you wish to configure. The **Cluster information** page opens.
 3. Click the **Network** tab to display your cluster's network information. Your access control list appears in the **Allowed IPs for control plane** section.
 4. Locate the IP address in your allowed list.