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changelog/january2025/2025-01-31-elastic-metal-added-new-ryzen-a610r-offer.mdx

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-title: New Ryzen A610R offer!
+title: New Ryzen A610R offer with NVMe Storage!
 status: added
 author:
     fullname: 'Join the #elastic-metal channel on Slack.'
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 product: elastic-metal
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-The Ryzen server lineup is expanding with the new Aluminium A610R offerings, with NVMe storage.
+The Ryzen server lineup is expanding with the new Aluminium A610R offering, featuring NVMe storage.
 
-You can find detailed specifications of the configurations below:
+You can find detailed specifications of the configuration below:
 
-| Offer           | Specifications                                              | Price          |  
-|---------------|------------------------------------------------------------|--------------|  
-| **EM-A610R-NVME** | - 1× AMD Ryzen PRO 3600 (6C/12T, 3.6 GHz)  <br> - 32 GB RAM  <br> - 2× 1.02 TB NVMe  <br> - 500 Mbps (up to 1 Gbps*) public - 1 Gbps private | **€59.99/month** | 
+| Offer               | Specifications                                              | Price          |
+|---------------------|------------------------------------------------------------|--------------|
+| **EM-A610R-NVME** | - 1× AMD Ryzen PRO 3600 (6C/12T, 3.6 GHz)<br /> - 32 GB RAM<br /> - 2× 1.02 TB NVMe<br /> - 500 Mbps (up to 1 Gbps*) public<br /> - 1 Gbps private | **€59.99/month** |
 
-This offer is currently available in PAR-1 and PAR-2 and will soon be deployed across all AZ.
+This offer is currently available in PAR-1 and PAR-2 and will soon be deployed across all availability zones (AZs).