Some rewording

Author: pwseg

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/website/javascript/cookie-validity-update.md

@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ analytics.load('writeKey', {
 > info ""
 > Chrome has a maximum limit of 400 days for cookies. If a value is set beyond that, then Chrome sets the upper limit to 400 days instead of rejecting it. Visit Chrome's [docs](https://developer.chrome.com/blog/cookie-max-age-expires/){:target="blank"} to learn more.
 
-###Device-mode Destination Cookies
+### Device-mode destination cookies
 
-Our platform does not control cookie management for device mode destinations. Our primary function involves loading third-party SDKs and forwarding events to them. Consequently, the way cookies are used and managed is solely determined by each individual SDK. For example, if you have concerns about destinations setting third-party cookies, we advise consulting directly with the destination providers for  clarification. For instance, Amplitude, one of the destinations in our catalog, provides an informative [article on this topic](https://www.docs.developers.amplitude.com/guides/cookies-consent-mgmt-guide/#abstraction-layer-for-storage){:target="blank"}.
+Segment doesn't control cookie management for device-mode destinations. As a result, the way cookies are used and managed is solely determined by each individual SDK. For example, if you have concerns about destinations setting third-party cookies, Segment recommends that you consult directly with the destination providers for clarification. For instance, Amplitude, one of the destinations in the Segment catalog, provides an informative [article on this topic](https://www.docs.developers.amplitude.com/guides/cookies-consent-mgmt-guide/#abstraction-layer-for-storage){:target="blank"}.
 
 ### User settings