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Co-authored-by: markzegarelli <[email protected]>

Author: stayseesong

src/connections/destinations/destination-filters.md

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 Use destination filters to prevent certain data from flowing into a destination. You can conditionally filter out event properties, traits, and fields, or even filter out the event itself.
 
-You can configure destination filters on cloud-mode destinations as well as on mobile and web device-mode destinations.  With device-mode destinations, you can use the same user interface or API mechanism that you use for your cloud-mode destinations, and have those filters acted upon for device-mode destinations on web and mobile.
+You can configure destination filters on cloud-mode, mobile, and web device-mode destinations.  With device-mode destinations, you can use the same user interface or API mechanism that you use for your cloud-mode destinations, and have those filters acted upon for device-mode destinations on web and mobile.
 
 Common use cases for destination filters include:
 - Managing PII (personally identifiable information) by blocking fields from reaching certain destinations

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/mobile/kotlin-android/index.md

@@ -341,13 +341,13 @@ analytics.add(yourPlugin)
 
 ### Example projects using Analytics-Kotlin
 See how different platforms and languages use Analytics-Kotlin in different [example projects](https://github.com/segmentio/analytics-kotlin/tree/main/samples){:target="_blank"}.
-The example projects contain sample [plugins](https://github.com/segmentio/analytics-kotlin/tree/main/samples/kotlin-android-app/src/main/java/com/segment/analytics/next/plugins){:target="_blank"} and [destination plugins](https://github.com/segmentio/analytics-kotlin/tree/main/samples/kotlin-android-app-destinations/src/main/java/com/segment/analytics/destinations/plugins){:target="_blank"} you can utilize.
+The example projects contain sample [plugins](https://github.com/segmentio/analytics-kotlin/tree/main/samples/kotlin-android-app/src/main/java/com/segment/analytics/next/plugins){:target="_blank"} and [destination plugins](https://github.com/segmentio/analytics-kotlin/tree/main/samples/kotlin-android-app-destinations/src/main/java/com/segment/analytics/destinations/plugins){:target="_blank"} you can use.
 
 ## Destination filters
 > info ""
 > Destination filters are only available to Business Tier customers.
 
-You can set up [destination filters](docs/connections/destinations/destination-filters/) on your mobile device-mode destinations by using Analytics Kotlin (Android). 
+Use Analytics Kotlin (Android) to configure [destination filters](docs/connections/destinations/destination-filters/) on your mobile device-mode destinations.
 
 To get started with destination filters on mobile device-mode destinations using Kotlin:
 

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/mobile/swift-ios/index.md

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 > info ""
 > Destination filters are only available to Business Tier customers.
 
-You can set up [destination filters](docs/connections/destinations/destination-filters/) on your mobile device-mode destinations by using Analytics Swift.
+Use Analytics Swift to set up [destination filters](docs/connections/destinations/destination-filters/) on your mobile device-mode destinations.
 
 To get started with destination filters using Swift:
 1. Add the plugin dependency to your application by adding the Swift package `git@github.com:segmentio/DestinationFilters-Swift.git` as a dependency through either of these 2 options:
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ To get started with destination filters using Swift:
         1. Xcode 12: **File > Swift Packages > Add Package Dependency**
         2. Xcode 13: **File > Add Packages...**
 
-    After installing the package, you can reference the Destination Filters plugin by importing the package with `import DestinationFilters_Swift`.
+    After you install the package, import the package with `import DestinationFilters_Swift` to reference the Destination Filters plugin.
 2. Add the plugin.
 ```swift
 analytics.add(DestinationFilters())