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rchinn1 · rchinn1 · commit 2d7de6d90e5c · 2022-09-15T08:52:21.000-07:00
diff --git a/src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/mobile/amp/index.md b/src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/mobile/amp/index.md
@@ -6,12 +6,12 @@ redirect_from: '/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/server/amp/'
 The [Segment AMP](https://www.ampproject.org/docs/reference/components/amp-analytics#segment){:target="_blank"} component makes it easy to send your data to lots of tools without having to learn, test or implement a new AMP component every time.
 The component automatically collects default properties and sends a page view.
 
-**NOTE:** Since our AMP source sends data directly to our servers, only destinations that support [cloud-mode](/docs/connections/destinations/#connection-modes) are compatible with AMP.
+**NOTE:** Since the AMP source sends data directly to Segment's servers, only destinations that support [cloud-mode](/docs/connections/destinations/#connection-modes) are compatible with AMP.
 
 
 ## Getting started
 
-If you're new to [AMP](https://www.ampproject.org){:target="_blank"}, go through their excellent [Quickstart](https://www.ampproject.org/docs/get_started/create_page.html){:target="_blank"}. Once you're setup, follow the steps below to implement Segment.
+If you're new to [AMP](https://www.ampproject.org){:target="_blank"}, go through Amp's excellent [Quickstart](https://www.ampproject.org/docs/get_started/create_page.html){:target="_blank"}. Once you're setup, follow the steps below to implement Segment.
 
 ### Step 1: Include AMP component
 Before the closing `</head>` tag, include the [`amp-analytics` component](https://www.ampproject.org/docs/reference/components/amp-analytics){:target="_blank"}:
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Before the closing `</head>` tag, include the [`amp-analytics` component](https:
   ```
 
 ### Step 2: Include Segment analytics
-Within you `<body>` tags, include the following Segment analytics snippet:
+Within your `<body>` tags, include the following Segment analytics snippet:
 
   ```html
 <body>
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ In order to enable this feature, you'll need to include a `linkers` object set t
 ## Troubleshooting
 
 ### Can I use client-side Destinations?
-No. All AMP data is sent from Google's servers to our server-side API and subsequently only onto our server-side Destinations. You will only be able to use our server-side destinations and their relevant setting. For example, for Google Analytics, use the "Server-side Tracking ID".
+No. All AMP data is sent from Google's servers to Segment's server-side API and subsequently only onto Segment's server-side destinations. You'll only be able to use Segment's server-side destinations and their relevant settings. For example, for Google Analytics, use the "Server-side Tracking ID".
 
 ### How do I identify users?
 Because AMP is static, it doesn't provide many options for persistently identifying users. AMP provides a basic cookie mechanism called an AMP Client ID which is a uniquely generated cookie for every unique end user's AMP session. Depending on Google's caching settings, you may receive multiple AMP Client IDs for the same user. Segment will [capture](https://github.com/ampproject/amphtml/blob/b8abe2137f1a50ca6173a258fced64e41a46c763/extensions/amp-analytics/0.1/vendors.js#L1629-L1659){:target="_blank"} this AMP Client ID as an `anonymous_id` and it will be of this format: `amp-REDmCPH4F0QX44kCFomrcA`.
