Update hipaa-eligible-segment.md

Author: forstisabella

src/privacy/hipaa-eligible-segment.md

@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ These logs can be provided upon request. For specific requests, please reach out
 
 ## Data encryption
 
-Segment encrypts the data in fields [marked as yellow in the Privacy Portal](/docs/privacy/portal) using a key pair. After Segment encrypts the data, it converts the data type to `string`. Any validation that looks for the datatype `integer` will fail for encrypted values.
+Segment encrypts the data in fields [marked as yellow in the Privacy Portal](/docs/privacy/portal) using a key pair. After Segment encrypts the data, it converts the data type to `string`. Any downstream validation that looks for the datatype `integer` will fail for encrypted values.
 
 > info "Data encryption is currently in public beta"
 > This means that the data encryption features are in active development, and some functionality may change before it becomes generally available. [Contact Segment](https://segment.com/help/contact/){:target="_blank"} with any feedback or questions.
@@ -49,12 +49,12 @@ Segment encrypts the data in fields [marked as yellow in the Privacy Portal](/do
 To configure data encryption while setting up a new destination:
 1. From the Destinations page in the Segment App, click **Add destination**.
 2. Select a destination from the catalog and click **Configure**.
-3. On the Select data source page, select the source you want to connect to your destination.
-4. Click **Next**.
+3. On the destination's overview page, click **Add destination**. 
+4. On the Select data source page, select the source you want to connect to your destination and click **Next**.
 5. On the Setup page, give your destination a name, fill in any optional settings, and select the **Have Segment encrypt sensitive data** checkbox.
 6. Open the **Fields** dropdown, select one or more fields you'd like to encrypt and click the **Generate Encryption Keys** button. 
 7. Copy the Private Key to a secure location - **once you finish setting up the destination, this key cannot be retrieved**. 
-8. Click **Save**.
+8. Click **Create destination**.
 
 > error "Private Key is not recoverable"
 > Segment does not save the private key created during the data encryption setup flow, and cannot retrieve the key after you finish setting up your destination. You can generate a new key without decrypting your data using the instructions in the [Configure new key pairs](#configure-new-key-pairs) section.
@@ -80,15 +80,15 @@ If you lose access to your initial private key, you can generate a new key pair
 To generate a new key pair:
 1. Open the [My destinations page](https://app.segment.com/goto-my-workspace/destinations){:target="_blank”} in the Segment app.
 2. Select a destination, and click **Settings**.
-3. On the Settings page, deselect the **Have Segment encrypt sensitive data** checkbox.
+3. 
 
 <!---todo: after test env access, verify steps beyond step #3--->
 
 ### Remove encryption
 
 Disabling the **Have Segment encrypt sensitive data** setting removes encryption on all data that comes into a source after the setting was disabled. Disabling the **Have Segment encrypt sensitive data** setting does not decrypt any data that has already been encrypted.
 
-To remove encryption from future data coming into a destination:
+To remove encryption from incoming data:
 1. Open the [My destinations page](https://app.segment.com/goto-my-workspace/destinations){:target="_blank”} in the Segment app.
 2. Select a destination, and click **Settings**.
 3. On the Settings page, deselect the **Have Segment encrypt sensitive data** checkbox.