Merge pull request #6098 from segmentio/segment-app-page-fix

Fixed bug on Segment App index page

Author: forstisabella

src/segment-app/index.md

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 title: The Segment Web App
 ---
 
-When you first log in, you go to your workspace. (If you're a member of several workspaces, you get to choose which one to go to.) Workspaces organize sets of sources and destinations
+When you first log in, you go to your workspace. (If you're a member of several workspaces, you get to choose which one to go to.) Workspaces organize sets of sources and destinations into a central location.
 
-{% include components/reference-button.html href="https://university.segment.com/introduction-to-segment/299965?reg=1&referrer=docs" icon="media/academy.svg" title="Segment University: Segment App Overview" description="Want a video tour of the Segment workpsace? Head over to Segment University! (Must be logged in to access.)" %}
+{% include components/reference-button.html href="https://university.segment.com/introduction-to-segment/299965?reg=1&referrer=docs" icon="media/academy.svg" title="Segment University: Segment App Overview" description="Want a video tour of the Segment workspace? Head over to Segment University! (Must be logged in to access.)" %}
 
 ### What's a Workspace?
 
@@ -17,11 +17,11 @@ This is a Segment workspace.
 
 ![Screenshot of the Overview page of a Segment workspace.](images/workspace-overview.png)
 
-The first thing you see is a graph of the Sources and Destinations you have connected to Segment. Sources send data to your workspace: these are your mobile apps, server sources, and website-based sources. Destinations are tools which get the data, and can also include Warehouses, which just store large amounts of data for later reuse and analysis.
+The first thing you see is a graph of the sources and destinations you have connected to Segment. Sources send data to your workspace: these are your mobile apps, server sources, and website-based sources. Destinations are tools which get the data, and can also include warehouses, which just store large amounts of data for later reuse and analysis.
 
-The graph on this overview page includes lines which can show you which Sources send data to which Destinations. If this is the first time you're looking at your workspace and you haven't set it up yet, it won't look quite like this.
+The graph on this overview page includes lines which can show you which sources send data to which destinations. If this is the first time you're looking at your workspace and you haven't set it up yet, it won't look quite like this.
 
-In the left navigation bar, you see the main parts of the Segment application: [Sources](/docs/connections/sources/), [Destinations](/docs/connections/destinations/), [Privacy](/docs/privacy/), and [Engage](/docs/engage/) and [Protocols](/docs/protocols/) if your subscription includes them.
+In the left navigation bar, you see the main parts of the Segment application: [Sources](/docs/connections/sources/), [Destinations](/docs/connections/destinations/), [Privacy](/docs/privacy/), [Engage](/docs/engage/), and [Protocols](/docs/protocols/), if your subscription includes them.
 
 You can also find the Catalog in the left navigation, which lists the sources you can collect data from, and the destinations you can send data to.
 
@@ -33,31 +33,31 @@ You can always click the Segment logo in the top left corner to get back to the
 
 The Sources tab lists everything that is sending data to your Segment workspace. Sources are organized by type: website, mobile, sever, or by cloud-app type, like CRM or payments.
 
-Each Source has a Status and a list of Destinations. A Source's Status tells you whether or not the source is sending data to Segment, and how long it's been since we last saw data from the source. The Source's Destinations list shows you which Destinations are receiving data from that Source. You can expand them for more detail.
+Each source has a status and a list of destinations. A source's status tells you whether or not the source is sending data to Segment, and how long it's been since Segment last saw data from the source. The source's destinations list shows you which destinations are receiving data from that source. You can expand them for more detail.
 
 ## Destinations
 
 ![Screenshot of the My Destinations page in the Segment app.](images/destinations.png)
 
-The Destination tab lists all of the Destinations connected to your workspace. These are sorted into categories like Analytics, Email marketing and other tool types. The list also shows whether or not Segment is sending data to that tool, or if the tool is enabled or disabled.
+The Destination tab lists all of the destinations connected to your workspace. These are sorted into categories like analytics, email marketing, and other tool types. The list also shows whether or not Segment is sending data to that tool, or if the tool is enabled or disabled.
 
 ## The Segment Integration Catalog
 
 ![Screenshot of the Segment Integration Catalog.](images/catalog.png)
 
-Next up we have the Catalog. The catalog includes a list of all [sources](/docs/connections/sources/) and [destinations](/docs/connections/destinations/) available in Segment. You can search either by category, or name. When you click on a catalog tile, the tile shows instructions on how to connect the tool to your Segment workspace.
+Next up is the Catalog. The catalog includes a list of all [sources](/docs/connections/sources/) and [destinations](/docs/connections/destinations/) available in Segment. You can search either by category or name. When you click on a catalog tile, the tile shows instructions on how to connect the tool to your Segment workspace.
 
-The Catalog is always growing, so check out the "New and Noteworthy" section from time to time to see what's new!
+The Catalog is always growing, so check out the "New and Noteworthy" section from time to time to see what's new.
 
 ## Engage and Protocols
 
-If you have Protocols or Engage enabled in your workspace, you'll see sections for those too. Protocols helps you structure and maintain the format of the data you send through Segment, and Engage helps you use your Segment data to build audiences and better understand your users.
+If you have Engage or Protocols enabled in your workspace, you'll see sections for those too. Engage helps you use your Segment data to build audiences and better understand your users, and Protocols helps you structure and maintain the format of the data you send through Segment.
 
 These features are fairly advanced, but you can learn more about them by [requesting a demo](https://segment.com/contact/sales/), or reading more in the [Engage documentation](/docs/engage/), and the [Protocols documentation](/docs/protocols/).
 
 ## Segment Settings
 
-The **Workspace Settings** tab shows more information about your workspace, including your team settings, GDPR requests, and so on. You might not have access to edit these settings!
+The **Workspace Settings** tab shows more information about your workspace, including your team settings, GDPR requests, and so on. You might not have access to edit these settings.
 
 The **User Preferences** tab shows your individual account settings, including Notification settings. 
 
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ Issues on the Health tab are sorted by Sources, Destinations, Warehouses, and ag
 
 ![Screenshot of the Integration Health page in the Segment app.](images/health.png)
 
-If errors are present, they're sorted by type and include information about how long ago they were last seen, and how many times they've occurred. You can click the wrench icon on an individual error line to view the Event Delivery tool and see the erroring payload and response. You can also disable, or delete the erroring integration from this menu.
+If errors are present, they're sorted by type and include information about how long ago they were last seen and how many times they've occurred. You can click the wrench icon on an individual error line to view the Event Delivery tool and see the erroring payload and response. You can also disable or delete the erroring integration from this menu.
 
 ## Privacy Portal