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Author: marinhero

src/connections/destinations/catalog/amazon-kinesis-firehose/index.md

@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ If you have many sources using Kinesis that it's impractical to attach all of th
 To set this value for a Secret ID:
 1. Go to the Kinesis Firehose destination settings from each of your Segment sources.
 2. Click **Secret ID** and enter your Workspace ID.
-    * **NOTE:** For security purposes, Segment recommends you to use your Segment Workspace ID as your Secret ID. If you’re using a Secret ID different from your Workspace ID, consider changing it. You can find your Workspace ID by going to:  **Settings > Workspace Settings > ID** from the Segment dashboard.
+    * **NOTE:** For security purposes, Segment recommends you to use your Segment Workspace ID as your Secret ID. If you’re using a Secret ID different from your Workspace ID, please change it to make your account more secure. You can find your Workspace ID by going to:  **Settings > Workspace Settings > ID** from the Segment dashboard.
 3. Once all of your sources are updated to use this value, find the IAM role you created for this destination in the AWS Console in **Services > IAM > Roles**.
 4. Select the role and navigate to the **Trust Relationships** tab.
 5. Click **Edit trust relationship**. You should see a snippet that looks something like this:

src/connections/destinations/catalog/amazon-kinesis/index.md

@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ To get started:
 4. Create a new Kinesis destination.
    1. In the Segment source that you want to connect to your Kinesis destination, click **Add Destination**. Search and select the **Amazon Kinesis** destination.
    2. Enter the **Role Address**, **Stream Region**, **Stream Name**, and **Secret ID**.
-   * **NOTE:** For security purposes, Segment recommends you to use your Workspace ID as your Secret ID. If you’re using a Secret ID different from your Workspace ID, consider changing it. You can find your Workspace ID by going to: **Settings > Workspace Settings > ID**.
+   * **NOTE:** For security purposes, Segment recommends you to use your Workspace ID as your Secret ID. If you’re using a Secret ID different from your Workspace ID, please change it to make your account more secure. You can find your Workspace ID by going to: **Settings > Workspace Settings > ID**.
 
 ## Page
 If you're not familiar with the Segment Specs, take a look to understand what the [Page method](https://segment.com/docs/connections/spec/page/) does. An example call would look like:

src/connections/destinations/catalog/amazon-lambda/index.md

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ Using CloudFormation minimizes the setup steps needed, and is Segment's recommen
 
    5. Give your stack a name.
    6. For the **ExternalId** parameter, enter the "External ID" setting in your Segment Lambda destination settings. This should be your **Workspace ID**.
-      * **NOTE:** For security purposes, Segment recommends you to use your Workspace ID as your External ID. If you’re currently using an External ID different from your Workspace ID, consider changing it. You can find your Workspace ID by going to:  **Settings > Workspace Settings > ID**.
+      * **NOTE:** For security purposes, Segment recommends you to use your Workspace ID as your External ID. If you’re currently using an External ID different from your Workspace ID, please change it to make your account more secure. You can find your Workspace ID by going to:  **Settings > Workspace Settings > ID**.
    7. The **LambdaARN** parameter corresponds to the **Lambda** setting in your Segment Lambda destination settings.
 
       ![](images/CloudFormationStackDetails.png)

src/connections/destinations/catalog/amazon-personalize/index.md

@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@ To create an IAM role:
 > note ""
 > **NOTE:** Your Source ID can be found by navigating to **Settings > API Keys** from your Segment source homepage.
 >
-> If you're using an External ID, for security purposes, Segment recommends you to use your Segment Workspace ID as your External ID. If you use an External ID different from your Workspace ID, consider changing it. You can find your Workspace ID by going to:  **Settings > Workspace Settings > ID** in the Segment dashboard.
+> If you're using an External ID, for security purposes, Segment recommends you to use your Segment Workspace ID as your External ID. If you use an External ID different from your Workspace ID, please change it to make your account more secure. You can find your Workspace ID by going to:  **Settings > Workspace Settings > ID** in the Segment dashboard.
 
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