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-> info "Linked Events is in private beta"
-> Linked Events is in private beta, and Segment is actively working on this feature. Some functionality may change before it becomes generally available. 
+> info "Linked Profiles is in public beta"
+> Linked Profiles (Data Graph, Linked Events, and Linked Audiences) is in public beta, and Segment is actively working on this feature. Some functionality may change before it becomes generally available.
 
-On this page, you'll learn how to connect your Databricks data warehouse to your Segment Data Graph. 
+On this page, you'll learn how to connect your Databricks data warehouse to the Segment Data Graph. 
 
 > info ""
 > At this time, you can only use Databricks with Linked Audiences.
 
 ## Set up Databricks credentials
 
-Sign into Databricks with admin permissions to create new resources and provide Data Graph with the necessary permissions. 
+Sign into Databricks with admin permissions to create new resources and provide the Data Graph with the necessary permissions. 
 
 Segment assumes that you already have a workspace that includes the datasets you'd like to use for the Data Graph. Segment recommends setting up a new Service Principal user with only the permissions to access the required catalogs and schemas.
 
-### Step 1: Set up a Service Principal and SQL Warehouse 
+### Step 1: Set up a Service Principal user and SQL Warehouse 
 
-Segment recommends that you set up a new Service Principal. If you already have a Service Principal you'd like to use, grant it "Can use" permissions for your data warehouse and proceed to [Step 2: Create a catalog for Segment to store checkpoint tables](#step-2-create-a-catalog-for-segment-to-store-checkpoint-tables). 
+Segment recommends that you set up a new Service Principal user. If you already have a Service Principal user you'd like to use, grant it "Can use" permissions for your data warehouse and proceed to [Step 2: Create a catalog for Segment to store checkpoint tables](#step-2-create-a-catalog-for-segment-to-store-checkpoint-tables). 
 
-To verify that your Service Principal has "Can use" permission, see the [Confirm Service Principal permissions](#confirm-service-principal-permissions) documentation. 
+If you want to create a new Service Principal user, complete the following substeps: 
 
-#### Create a new Service Principal User
+#### Substep 1: Create a new Service Principal user
 1. Log into the Databricks UI as an Admin.
 2. Click **User Management**. 
 3. Select the **Service principals** tab. 
 4. Click **Add Service Principal**.
-5. Enter a Service principal name and click **Add**. 
-6. Select the Service Principal you just created and click **Generate secret**.
+5. Enter a Service Principal user name and click **Add**. 
+6. Select the Service Principal user you just created and click **Generate secret**.
 7. Save the **Secret** and **Client ID** to a safe place. You'll need these values to connect your Databricks warehouse to Segment. 
-8. To add the user to the workspace:
-  1. Navigate to Workspaces and select your Workspace. 
-  2. Select the “Permissions” tab and click **Add Permissions**. 
-  3. Add the newly created Service Principal user and click **Save**. 
+8. Navigate to Workspaces and select your Workspace. 
+9. Select the “Permissions” tab and click **Add Permissions**. 
+10. Add the newly created Service Principal user and click **Save**. 
 
 > success ""
-> If you already have a warehouse you'd like to use, you can [Add your Service Principal User to Warehouse User Lists](#add-your-service-principal-user-to-warehouse-user-lists). If you need to create a new warehouse, see the [Create a new warehouse](#create-a-new-warehouse) documentation. 
+> If you already have a warehouse you'd like to use, you can move on to the next substep, [Substep 2: Add your Service Principal user to Warehouse User Lists](#substep-2-add-your-service-principal-user-to-warehouse-user-lists). If you need to create a new warehouse first, see the [Create a new warehouse](#create-a-new-warehouse) before completing the next substep. 
 
-#### Add your Service Principal User to Warehouse User Lists 
+#### Substep 2: Add your Service Principal user to Warehouse User Lists 
 1. Log into the Databricks UI as an Admin.
 2. Navigate to SQL Warehouses. 
 3. Select your warehouse and click **Permissions**. 
-4. Add the Service Principal user and grant the user “Can use” access. 
+4. Add the Service Principal user and grant them “Can use” access. 
 5. Click **Add**. 
 
-##### Confirm Service Principal permissions
+##### (Optional) Confirm Service Principal permissions
 Confirm that the Service Principal user that you're using to connect to Segment has "Can use" permissions for your warehouse. 
 
-To confirm that your Service Principal has "Can use" permission: 
+To confirm that your Service Principal user has "Can use" permission: 
 1. In the Databricks console, navigate to SQL Warehouses and select your warehouse. 
 2. Navigate to Overview and click **Permissions**. 
-3. Verify that the Service Principal has "Can use" permission. 
+3. Verify that the Service Principal user has "Can use" permission. 
 
 ### Step 2: Create a catalog for Segment to store checkpoint tables
 
-> warning "Segment recommends creating an empty catalog for Data Graph"
+> warning "Segment recommends creating an empty catalog for the Data Graph"
 > If you plan to use an existing catalog with Reverse ETL, follow the instructions in the [Update user access for Segment Reverse ETL catalog](#update-user-access-for-segment-reverse-etl-catalog) section.
  
 Segment requires write access to a catalog to create a schema for internal bookkeeping, and to store checkpoint tables for the queries that are executed. 
@@ -81,8 +80,8 @@ Run the SQL below to grant the Data Graph read-only access to the Profiles Sync
 GRANT USAGE, SELECT, USE SCHEMA ON CATALOG `${profiles_sync_catalog}` TO `${client_id}`;
 ```
 
-### Step 4: Grant read-only access to additional catalogs for Data Graph
-Run the SQL below to grant your Service Principal read-only access to any additional catalogs you want to use for Data Graph: 
+### Step 4: Grant read-only access to additional catalogs for the Data Graph
+Run the SQL below to grant your Service Principal user read-only access to any additional catalogs you want to use for the Data Graph: 
 
 ```sql 
 -- Run the SQL below for each catalog you want to use for the Segment Data Graph
@@ -102,7 +101,7 @@ GRANT USAGE, SELECT ON SCHEMA `${schema_2}` TO `${client_id}`;
 
 ```
 
-### (Optional) Restrict read access to tables
+### (Optional) Restrict read-only access to tables
 Restrict access to specific tables by running the following SQL: 
 
 ```sql
@@ -140,7 +139,7 @@ Segment requires the following settings to connect to your Databricks warehouse.
 - **Service principal client ID**: The client ID used to access to your Databricks warehouse
 - **OAuth secret**: The OAuth secret used to connect to your Databricks warehouse
 
-After identifying the following settings, continue setting up your Data Graph by following the instructions in [Connect your warehouse to the Data Graph](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/data-graph/#step-2-connect-your-warehouse-to-the-data-graph). 
+After identifying the following settings, continue setting up the Data Graph by following the instructions in [Connect your warehouse to the Data Graph](/docs/unify/linked-profiles/data-graph/#step-2-connect-your-warehouse-to-the-data-graph). 
 
 ## Additional set up for warehouse permissions