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Author: rchinn1

src/engage/audiences/linked-audiences.md

@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ redirect_from:
 ---
 
 > info "Linked Audiences is in private beta"
-> Linked Audiences is in private beta, and Segment is actively working on this feature. Some functionality may change before it becomes generally available. [Contact Segment](https://segment.com/help/contact/){:target="_blank"} with any feedback or questions.
+> Linked Audiences is in private beta, and Segment is actively working on this feature. Some functionality may change before it becomes generally available. 
 
 With Linked Audiences, you can use the relational data you've defined in your Data Graph to build audiences and send them to your downstream [actions-based destination](/docs/connections/destinations/actions/#available-actions-based-destinations).
 
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ Engage displays the following compute statuses for Linked Audiences.
 | Computation status        | Description                           |
 |---------------------------|---------------------------------------|
 | Computing                 | Engage is computing the Linked Audience.           |
-| Live                      | The Linked Audience is live. Users will enter in real-time as they meet entry criteria.        |
+| Live                      | Users will enter the audience as it's computed on the scheduled hourly cadence.        |
 | Disabled                  | The Linked Audience is disabled.                   |
 | Failed                    | The computation was cancelled or failed to compute. Please contact [Segment support](https://segment.com/help/contact/){:target="_blank"}.            |
 
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ You can send events:
 
 #### Entity added
 
-Send a Track event when an entity matching the audience conditions is added. Select your entity from the **Select entity** dropdown menu.
+Send a Track event when the lowest entity branch matches the audience condition.
 
 Example use cases:
 - Send a reminder to a customer when a credit card associated with their profile has an outstanding balance.
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ Below are some example use cases to help you learn more about Linked Audiences.
 
 ### Build an audience of cat owners who are also a part of the platinum membership tier
 
-Build an audience with `Households` and `Pets` where:
+Build an audience with `Households` and `Pets` where the following conditions are true:
 - `pets.type` = "cat"
 
 And where:
@@ -211,7 +211,7 @@ Furthermore, adding the audience membership condition will allow marketers to fu
 
 ### Build an audience of users with premium subscriptions who are located in Canada
 
-Build an audience with `Accounts` and `Subscriptions`, where the following are true:
+Build an audience with `Accounts` and `Subscriptions`, where the following conditions are true:
 - `subscription.status` = "active"
 - `subscription.tier` = "premium"
 
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@ Furthermore, adding the profile condition will allow marketers to further refine
 
 ### Build an audience of credit card holders with a certain number of transactions
 
-Build an audience with `Accounts`, `Credit Cards`, and `Transactions` where the following are true: 
+Build an audience with `Accounts`, `Credit Cards`, and `Transactions` where the following conditions are true: 
 - `credit_cards.name` equals "Owly Card" 
 - `transactions.count` is greater than five
 

src/unify/linked-profiles/linked-events.md

@@ -89,12 +89,10 @@ The table below shows the data warehouses Linked Events supports. View the Segme
 
 The [Data Graph](/unify/linked-profiles/data-graph/) is a semantic layer that represents a subset of relevant business data that you'll use to enrich events in downstream tools. Use the configuration language spec below to add models to build out your Data Graph.
 
-### Deleting and editing entities and/or relationships from your Data Graph
-
 Each Unify space has one Data Graph. The current version is v0.0.6 but this may change in the future as Segment accepts feedback about the process.
 
 > warning ""
-> Deleting and/or editing entities and relationships to the Data Graph may lead to errors if these entities or relationships are referenced in existing Linked Audiences and Linked Events. Segment recommends creating a new Linked Audience or Linked Event. <br><br> Please note that while you can delete relationships or entities from the Data Graph, these relationships will still show up in the Linked Audience Builder and Linked Events.
+> Deleting entities and relationships are not yet supported.
  
 ### Defining entities 
 
@@ -115,7 +113,7 @@ An entity is a stateful representation of a business object. The entity correspo
 
 
 ```python
-# Define an entity and optionally indicate if the entity will be referenced for Linked Events (event enrichment)
+# Define an entity and indicate if the entity will be referenced for Linked Events (enrichment_enabled=true)
 
 entity "account-entity" {
      name = "account"
@@ -126,9 +124,9 @@ entity "account-entity" {
 ```
 
 
-## Step 3: Add a Destination
+## Step 3: Add an actions-based destination
 
-To use Linked Events, you'll need to add a destination to send enriched events to. Navigate to **Connections > Destinations**. Select an existing destination, or click **+ Add destination** to add a new destination.  
+To use Linked Events, you'll need to add an action destination to send enriched events to. Navigate to **Connections > Destinations**. Select an existing action destination, or click **+ Add destination** to add a new action destination.  
 
 > info ""
 > For Linked Events, Segment supports [Destination Actions](/docs/connections/destinations/actions/).
@@ -168,13 +166,9 @@ In the Mappings tab, locate the **Select Mappings** section where you can enrich
 > warning ""
 > At this time, Linked Events doesn't support a preview of enriched payloads.
 
-### Test and save your Enrichments
-
-After you’ve added Enrichments, test and save your enrichments.
+### Save your Enrichments
 
-1. Test the mapping with data from a sample event.
-- The edit panel shows you the mapping output in the format for the destination tool. You can change your mapping as needed and re-test.
-2. When you're satisfied with the mapping, click **Save**. Segment returns you to the Mappings table.
+When you're satisfied with the mappings, click **Save**. Segment returns you to the Mappings table.
 
 > warning ""
 > At this time, when you select mappings or test events, you won’t see enrichment data. Enrichment data is only available with real events.
@@ -189,9 +183,9 @@ To use Linked Events, be sure that you have proper permissions for the Data Ware
 
 Segment currently syncs once every hour.
 
-#### Which Action Destinations does Linked Events support? 
+#### Which Destinations does Linked Events support? 
 
-For Linked Events, Segment supports all Actions Destinations. 
+For Linked Events, Segment supports all actions-based destinations. 
 
 #### Why aren't test events working? 
 

src/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/BigQuery-setup.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ plan: unify
 ---
 
 > info "Linked Events is in private beta"
-> Linked Events is in private beta, and Segment is actively working on this feature. Some functionality may change before it becomes generally available. [Contact Segment](https://segment.com/help/contact/){:target="_blank"} with any feedback or questions.
+> Linked Events is in private beta, and Segment is actively working on this feature. Some functionality may change before it becomes generally available. 
 
 > info ""
 > At this time, you can only use BigQuery with Linked Events. 

src/unify/linked-profiles/setup-guides/redshift-setup.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ plan: unify
 ---
 
 > info "Linked Events is in private beta"
-> Linked Events is in private beta, and Segment is actively working on this feature. Some functionality may change before it becomes generally available. [Contact Segment](https://segment.com/help/contact/){:target="_blank"} with any feedback or questions.
+> Linked Events is in private beta, and Segment is actively working on this feature. Some functionality may change before it becomes generally available. 
 
 > info ""
 > At this time, you can only use Redshift with Linked Events.