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Co-authored-by: Vadim Demedes <[email protected]>

Author: Andy

src/connections/functions/destination-functions.md

@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ If any of your deployed function instances are failing consistently, they will a
 
 ### Data control
 
-You can use [Destination Filters](/docs/connections/destinations/destination-filters/) or Privacy Controls to manage what events and, of those events, which event properties are sent to your Destination Function.
+You can use [Destination Filters](/docs/connections/destinations/destination-filters/) or [Privacy Portal](https://segment.com/docs/privacy/portal/) to manage what events and, of those events, which event properties are sent to your destination function.
 
 ## Destination functions FAQs
 

src/connections/functions/usage.md

@@ -44,19 +44,19 @@ If you’re making many requests that could be done in parallel, ensure that you
 
 ```js
 for (const objectId of event.properties.objects) {
-   const resp = await fetch('https://example.com/?id=' + objectId, {
+   const response = await fetch('https://example.com/?id=' + objectId, {
+       method: 'POST',
        body: event.properties
    })
-   console.log(resp.json())
+   
+   console.log(response.json())
 }
-
-return "Done!"
 ```
 
 Instead, consider making an array of async requests that are running in parallel and then using `Promise.all()` to wait for all of them to complete:
 
 ```js
-const requests = event.properties.objects.map((objectId) => {
+const requests = event.properties.objects.map(objectId => {
     return fetch('https://example.com/?id=' + objectId, {
         body: event.properties
     })