resolve localytics-kotlin edits

Author: alanjcharles

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/mobile/apple/destination-plugins/localytics-swift.md

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ let analytics = Analytics(configuration: Configuration(writeKey: "<YOUR WRITE KE
                     .trackApplicationLifecycleEvents(true))
 analytics.add(plugin: LocalyticsDestination())
 ```
-Your events will now be given Localytics session data and start flowing to Localytics via device-mode.
+Your events now have Localytics session data and start flowing to Localytics in device-mode.
 
 ## Identify
 

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/mobile/kotlin-android/destination-plugins/localytics-kotlin-android.md

@@ -3,15 +3,14 @@ title: Analytics Kotlin Localytics Plugin
 id: 54521fd925e721e32a72eed0
 ---
 Our Analytics-Kotlin Localytics Destination Plugin is open sourced on GitHub. Feel free to
-[check it out here](https://github.com/segment-integrations/analytics-kotlin-localytics).
+[check it out here](https://github.com/segment-integrations/analytics-kotlin-localytics){:target="_blank”}.
 
-## Getting Started
+## Getting started
 
 1.  From the Segment Destinations page click **Add Destination**.
-2.  Search for `Localytics` and select it in the results that appear.
-3.  Choose which Source to connect `Localytics` to.
-4.  Add your `Localytics` App Key to the Destination setting.
-
+2.  Search for Localytics and select it in the results that appear.
+3.  Choose which source to connect to your Localytics destination.
+4.  Add your Localytics App Key to the destination's settings tab.
 
 Once the Segment library is integrated with your site or app, toggle Localytics
 on in your Segment destinations, and add your application's **App Key** which
@@ -28,7 +27,7 @@ here](https://docs.localytics.com/dev/android.html#include-localytics-xml-file){
 
 
 ## Adding the dependency
-To install the Segment-Localytics integration, simply add this line to your gradle file:
+To install the Segment-Localytics integration, add this line to your gradle file:
 
 ```
 implementation 'com.segment.analytics.kotlin.destinations:localytics:<latest_version>'
@@ -64,9 +63,9 @@ allprojects {
 }
 ```
 
-## Using the Plugin in your App
+## Using the plugin in your app
 
-Open the file where you setup and configure the Analytics-Kotlin library.  Add this plugin to the list of imports.
+Open the file where you set up and configured the Analytics-Kotlin library.  Add this plugin to the list of imports.
 
 ```
 import com.segment.analytics.kotlin.destinations.localytics.LocalyticsDestination
@@ -82,47 +81,39 @@ Just under your Analytics-Kotlin library setup, call `analytics.add(plugin = ...
     analytics.add(plugin = LocalyticsDestination())
 ```
 
-Your events will now begin to flow to Localytics in Device Mode.
-
+Your events now have Localytics session data and start flowing to Localytics in device-mode.
 
 ## Identify
 
-When you call [`identify`](/docs/connections/spec/identify/), we'll set the Localytics
-customer Id, and set any special Localytics traits you provide, such as `name`,
-or `email`, and any custom traits as well.
+When you make an [Identify](/docs/connections/spec/identify/) call, Segment sets the Localytics
+customerId and any special Localytics traits you provide, like `name`,
+`email`, or custom traits.
 
 ## Track
 
-Whenever you call [`track`](/docs/connections/spec/track/), we'll log an event with
-Localytics. [`track`](/docs/connections/spec/track/) takes the name of the event and any
-optional properties you want to associate with the event.
+When you make a [Track](/docs/connections/spec/track/) call, Segment logs an event with Localytics containing the name of the event and any optional event properties.
 
-- - -
 
 ## Push Notifications
 
-Push notifications on Android require a bit of extra work to setup.
+To enable push notifications on your Android app, complete the following steps:
 
-* First, you need to make sure Localytics is being bundled. You can find out
-  more information about bundled integrations in our [Android documentation](/docs/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/mobile/android/#about-mobile-connection-modes).
-
-* Follow Localytics' documentation to [set up the permission in your
+1. To confirm that Localytics is bundled, verify that Localytics is set to `false` in your integrations object. For
+  more information about bundled integrations, see Segment's [Android documentation](/docs/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/mobile/android/#about-mobile-connection-modes).
+2. Follow steps 1-3 of Localytics' documentation to [set up the permission in your
   AndroidManifest.xml](http://docs.localytics.com/dev/android.html#modify-androidmanifest-push-android){:target="_blank"}.
-  Specifically, the **AndroidManifest** changes regarding the `GcmReceiver`,
-  `GcmListenerService`, `InstanceIDListenerServer`, and `PushTrackingActivity`
-  classes.
-
-* In lieu of step four, you will register the Push receiver in your Activity or
+  
+3. Make the AndroidManifest changes to the `GcmReceiver`,
+  `GcmListenerService`, `InstanceIDListenerServer`, and `PushTrackingActivity` classes as noted in the [Localytics Push messaging documentation](https://help.uplandsoftware.com/localytics/dev/android.html#migrating-v3-to-v4-push-messaging-android){:target="_blank"}.
+4. Register the Push receiver in your Activity or
   Application class within a Segment `onIntegrationReady` method:
-
-```java
+ ```java
 @Override protected void onResume() {
     super.onResume();
-
      Analytics.with(this).onIntegrationReady(BundledIntegration.LOCALYTICS, new Callback() {
       @Override public void onIntegrationReady(Object integration) {
         Localytics.registerPush("YOUR-SENDER-ID");
       }
     });
 }
-```
+```