Minor cleanup

Author: pwseg

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/mobile/apple/ios-17.md

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 > info ""
-> iOS 17 and Xcode 15 are still in beta. The information below is subject to change as these > features become generally available. 
+> iOS 17 and Xcode 15 are in beta. The information on this page is subject to change as these features become generally available. 
 >
 
-Apple has already begun to roll out new privacy features that will eventually become mandatory in iOS 17. For instance, you may have already seen or worked with [Privacy Nutrition Labels](https://www.apple.com/privacy/labels/). Privacy Nutrition Labels make it possible for users to better understand what information is being collected in your app. It is currently an optional feature but Apple expects to make this [mandatory in the Spring of 2024](https://developer.apple.com/news/?id=z6fu1dcu#:~:text=And%20starting%20in%20spring%202024,your%20app%20uses%20the%20API.). 
+Apple has begun to roll out new privacy features that will eventually become mandatory in iOS 17. For instance, you may have already seen or worked with [Privacy Nutrition Labels](https://www.apple.com/privacy/labels/){:target="_blank"}. Privacy Nutrition Labels make it possible for users to better understand what information your app collects. Privacy Nutrition Labels is currently an optional feature, but Apple expects to make it [mandatory in the Spring of 2024](https://developer.apple.com/news/?id=z6fu1dcu#:~:text=And%20starting%20in%20spring%202024,your%20app%20uses%20the%20API.){:target="_blank"}. 
 
-## Privacy Manifests 
+## Privacy manifests 
 
-While developers are ultimately responsible creating a Privacy Nutrition Label, it can be difficult to know exactly what all of their third-party SDKs are tracking. To make this easier, Apple is introducting Privacy Manifests in iOS 17. Over the next few months, you can expect all of the third-party SDKs in your app to include a Privacy Manifest. 
+While developers are ultimately responsible for creating Privacy Nutrition Labels, it can be difficult to know exactly what their third-party SDKs track. To make this easier, Apple is introducting Privacy Manifests in iOS 17. Over the next few months, you can expect all of your app's third-party SDKs to include a Privacy Manifest. 
 
 ## Required Reason API
 
-In an effort to limit fingerprinting, Apple is also making plans to have developers [delcare the reason for using specific APIs](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/bundleresources/privacy_manifest_files/describing_use_of_required_reason_api#overview). The Analytics-Swift library only uses the [`userDefaults`](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/bundleresources/privacy_manifest_files/describing_use_of_required_reason_api#4278401) API to store user and context information. It is declared in the Privacy Manifest found in Analytics Swift. 
+To limit fingerprinting, Apple plans to have developers [dclare the reason for using specific APIs](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/bundleresources/privacy_manifest_files/describing_use_of_required_reason_api#overview){:target="_blank"}. The Analytics-Swift library only uses the [`userDefaults`](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/bundleresources/privacy_manifest_files/describing_use_of_required_reason_api#4278401){:target="_blank"} API to store user and context information. It is declared in the Privacy Manifest found in Analytics Swift. 
 
-## Tracking Domains 
+## Tracking domains 
 
-Apple is also introducing the concept of [NSPrivacyTrackingDomains](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/bundleresources/privacy_manifest_files#4284009) to Privacy Manifests in iOS 17. This is an array of strings that lists the URLs the app connects to in order to aid in tracking. If the user has not granted tracking permission through the App Tracking Transparency framework, network requests to these domains fail and your app receives an error. The Analytics-Swift Privacy Manifest includes the endpoint Segment events are sent to. 
+Apple also introduces the concept of [NSPrivacyTrackingDomains](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/bundleresources/privacy_manifest_files#4284009){:target="_blank"} to Privacy Manifests in iOS 17. This is an array of strings that lists the URLs the app connects to in order to aid in tracking. If the user hasn't granted tracking permission through the App Tracking Transparency framework, network requests to these domains fail and your app receives an error. The Analytics-Swift Privacy Manifest includes the endpoint Segment events are sent to. 
 
 > info ""
-> If you set NSPrivacyTracking to true then you need to provide at least one internet domain in NSPrivacyTrackingDomains; otherwise, you can provide zero or more domains.
+> If you set NSPrivacyTracking to `true`, then you need to provide at least one internet domain in NSPrivacyTrackingDomains; otherwise, you can provide zero or more domains.
 
 
 ## Analytics-Swift Privacy Manifest 
 
-You can find the [Privacy Manifest for Analytics-Swift here](). The Segment Privacy Manifest includes an array of [Privacy Nutrition Label Types](https://developer.apple.com/app-store/app-privacy-details/#data-type) for the following automatically collected fields: 
+The Segment [Privacy Manifest for Analytics-Swift here]() includes an array of [Privacy Nutrition Label Types](https://developer.apple.com/app-store/app-privacy-details/#data-type){:target="_blank"} for the following automatically collected fields: 
 
 | Data               | Linked To User | Used For Tracking | Reason for Collection |
 | -------------------| ---------------| ------------------| ---------------------- |
@@ -42,17 +42,17 @@ You can find the [Privacy Manifest for Analytics-Swift here](). The Segment Priv
 | `Device ID`        | Yes            | No                | Developer's Advertising or Marketing |
 
 
-## Additional Privacy Manifests
+## Additional privacy manifests
 - [Analytics-Swift Engage Plugin]()
 - [Analytics-iOS (Classic)]()
 
 
-## Generating Your Privacy Report
+## Generating your privacy report
 
-Follow [the steps outlined here](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/bundleresources/privacy_manifest_files/describing_data_use_in_privacy_manifests) by Apple to generate your Privacy Report. Privacy Manifests make it easier to account for the data collected by third-party SDKs, but should not be considered a comprehensive list for your Privacy Report. Your Privacy Report is also subject to your Segment tracking implementation. If you're not certain about all of the data you're collecting, [Protocols](https://segment.com/docs/protocols/) and a [Tracking Plan](https://segment.com/docs/protocols/tracking-plan/create/) can make it easy to account for everything being tracked in your app.
+Follow the steps in Apple's [data use in privacy manifests documentation](https://developer.apple.com/documentation/bundleresources/privacy_manifest_files/describing_data_use_in_privacy_manifests){:target="_blank"} to generate your privacy report. Privacy manifests make it easier to account for the data collected by third-party SDKs but should not be considered as a comprehensive list for your privacy report. Your privacy report is also subject to your Segment tracking implementation. If you're not certain about all of the data you're collecting, [Protocols](/docs/protocols/) and a [Tracking Plan](/docs/protocols/tracking-plan/create/) can help you account for everything being tracked in your app.
 
 > success ""
-> Privacy Manifests are not necessary for Device Mode Plugins as Analytics-Swift does not collect any additional information or make >any network requests to Segment endpoints in Destination Plugins. 
+> Privacy manifests are not necessary for Device Mode Plugins, as Analytics-Swift doesn't collect any additional information or make any network requests to Segment endpoints in Destination Plugins.