Update index.md

Author: stayseesong

src/connections/sources/catalog/libraries/website/javascript/index.md

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 ## Cross-subdomain analytics
 
-Analytics.js tracks across subdomains out of the box; all Segment destinations fully support this feature.
+Analytics.js tracks across subdomains out of the box. All Segment destinations fully support this feature.
 
-To track activity on your subdomains, include the Segment Analytics.js snippet on each subdomain. Segment sets users' `anonymousId` on the top-level domain, so users are tracked across any subdomain.
+To track activity on your subdomains, include the Segment Analytics.js snippet on each subdomain. Segment sets users' `anonymousId` on the top-level domain, so that users are tracked across any subdomain.
 
-Since Segment tracks across subdomains, you can either use the same Segment source, or use separate sources for each subdomain. What you decide depends on your teams goals for tracking each subdomain. 
+Because Segment tracks across subdomains, you can either use the same Segment source, or use separate sources for each subdomain. What you decide depends on your team's goals for tracking each subdomain. 
 
 ## UTM Tracking