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Author: forstisabella

src/connections/alerting.md

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 Connections Alerting allows Segment users to receive in-app, email, and Slack notifications related to the performance and throughput of an event-streaming connection. 
 
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 To access Connections Alerting, select an event-streaming connection (like a web library source or cloud mode destination) and click the **Alerts** tab. 
 
 On the Alerts tab, you can create alerts and view all active alerts for this connection. You can only edit or delete the alerts that you create.
 
 ## Source volume alerts
 
-You can create an alert that notifies you when the volume of events received by your source in the last 24 hours changes beyond a percentage you set. For example, if you set a change percentage of 4%, Segment notifies you if your source ingests less than 96% or more than 104% of the event volume over the previous 24 hour period. 
+You can create an alert that notifies you when the volume of events received by your source in the last 24 hours changes beyond a percentage you set. For example, if you set a change percentage of 4% and your source received 100 events over the first 24 hours, Segment would notify you the following day if your source ingested fewer than 96 or more than 104 events.
 
 To receive a source volume alert in a Slack channel, you must first create a Slack webhook. For more information about Slack webhooks, see the [Sending messages using incoming webhooks](https://api.slack.com/messaging/webhooks){:target="_blank”} documentation.