address PR comments

Author: reneewang21

src/connections/reverse-etl/reverse-etl-source-setup-guides/bigquery-setup.md

@@ -36,14 +36,14 @@ When you construct your own role or policy, Segment needs the following permissi
 Permission | Details
 ---------- | --------
 `bigquery.datasets.create` | This allows Segment to create/manage a `__segment_reverse_etl` dataset for tracking state between syncs.
-`bigquery.datasets.get` | This allows Segment to determine if the aforementioned dataset exists
-`bigquery.jobs.create` | This allows Segment to execute queries on any datasets/tables your model query references and manage tables that Segment uses for tracking
+`bigquery.datasets.get` | This allows Segment to determine if the aforementioned dataset exists.
+`bigquery.jobs.create` | This allows Segment to execute queries on any datasets or tables your model query references, and also allows Segment to manage tables used for tracking.
 
-If you don't wish to grant `bigquery.datasets.create` access, you may create this dataset yourself, and Segment needs the following permissions:
+If you don't want to grant Segment `bigquery.datasets.create` access, you can create your own `__segment_reverse_etl` dataset and give Segment the following permissions: 
 Permission | Details
 ---------- | --------
-`bigquery.datasets.get` | This allows Segment to determine if the `__segment_reverse_etl` dataset exists
-`bigquery.tables.create` | This allows Segment to determine if the tables Segment uses to track state in `__segment_reverse_etl` dataset exists
-`bigquery.jobs.create` | This allows Segment to execute queries on any datasets/tables your model query references and manage tables that Segment uses for tracking
+`bigquery.datasets.get` | This allows Segment to determine if the `__segment_reverse_etl` dataset exists.
+`bigquery.tables.create` | This allows Segment to determine if the tables Segment uses to track state in the `__segment_reverse_etl` dataset exists.
+`bigquery.jobs.create` | This allows Segment to execute queries on any datasets or tables your model query references, and also allows Segment to manage tables used for tracking.
 
 The `bigquery.datasets.*` permissions can be scoped only to the `__segment_reverse_etl` dataset.