The phoenix - review (chapter 47 , Ágoston Sasvári)

[mycarta]

This chapter will need copy editing for little things like relative pronouns etcetera.

But it is a solid chapter, an interesting and enjoyable read. It makes a good story.

[stevejpurves]

I have been through this on curvenote and made a some of corrections. I think it is 99% ready to go but have one comment unresolved.

@mycarta is that a real word? https://curvenote.com/@swung/52-things-geocomputing/sasvari-the-pheonix