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 # Deployment Overview
 
-Sourcegraph offers multiple deployment options to meet your needs. The best option for your organization depends on your goals, requirements, technical expertise, and resources available. The following sections provide an overview of the options, their associated investments, and technical requirements.
+Sourcegraph is a powerful code intelligence platform that can be deployed in various ways to suit your organization's needs. This guide will help you understand the available deployment options and choose the best one for your use case.
 
 ## Deployment types
 
-Carefully consider your organization's needs and technical expertise when selecting a Sourcegraph deployment method. The method you choose cannot be changed for a running instance. The available methods have different capabilities, and the following sections provide recommendations to help you choose.
+Carefully consider your organization's needs and technical expertise when selecting a Sourcegraph deployment method. Each option has different capabilities, resource requirements, and levels of technical expertise needed. Consider your organization's needs carefully, as the deployment method cannot be easily changed for a running instance.
 
 ### Sourcegraph Cloud
 
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 Best for enterprises looking for a fully self-hosted solution.
 
-  - [Docker Compose](/admin/deploy/docker-compose/) - Install Sourcegraph on Docker Compose
+  - [Docker Compose](/admin/deploy/docker-compose/) - Install Sourcegraph using Docker Compose
 
 For setting up **non-production** environments on-premises.