Fixing typos

Author: rcastley

content/en/tko/session-5/deploy-loadgen.md

@@ -84,4 +84,4 @@ kubectl get statefulset loadgen -n loadgen
 What impact did this have? Where in O11y can you see the increased replica number?
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-Let the load generator run for around 2-3 minutes and keep observing the metrics in the Kubernetes Navigator and the Apache dashboard.
+Let the load generator run for around 2-3 minutes and keep observing the metrics in the Kubernetes Navigator and the Apache Navigator.

content/en/tko/session-5/deploy-otel.md

@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ As the new Kubernetes Navigator is still in Preview, some steps of this workshop
 - Switch back to the old Kubernetes Navigator by clicking on the big blue {{% button style="blue" %}}Switch to old navigator{{% /button %}} button in the top right corner of the Kubernetes Navigator.
 
 - Let us know in the **#tko-2023-o11y-session-5 channel** in Slack.
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+{{% /notice %}}
 
-As we are in the process of switching to the new generation of the Kubernetes Navigator, please check if you are already on the new Kubernetes navigator.
+We will be starting this workshop using the new Kubernetes Navigator so please check that you are already using the new Navigator.
 
 When you select **Infrastructure** from the main menu on the left, followed by selecting **Kubernetes**, you should see two services panes for Kubernetes, similar like the ones below:
 
@@ -39,11 +39,11 @@ Once its unset, you can refresh your page and reselect Kubernetes from the Infra
 
 ## 2. Connect to EC2 instance
 
-You will be able to connect to the workshop instance by using SSH from your Mac, Linux or Windows device.
+You will be able to connect to the workshop instance by using SSH from your Mac, Linux or Windows device. Open the link to the sheet provided in the **#tko-2023-o11y-session-5 channel** in Slack. This sheet contains the IP addresses and the password for the workshop instances. Please 
 
-To use SSH, open a terminal on your system and type `ssh [email protected]` (replacing x.x.x.x with the IP address assigned to you).
+To use SSH, open a terminal on your system and type `ssh [email protected]` (replacing x.x.x.x with the IP address assigned to you). The password for this workshop is also provided in the sheet.
 
-{{% notice title="Note" color="info" %}}
+{{% notice title="Note" style="info" %}}
 Your workshop instance has been pre-configured with the correct `ACCESS_TOKEN` and `REALM` for this workshop. There is no need for you to configure these.
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@@ -131,6 +131,7 @@ splunk-otel-collector-k8s-cluster-receiver-6c454894f8-mqs8n   1/1     Running
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+<!--
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 If you are using the Kubernetes Integration setup from the Data Management page from the O11y UI , you find that the guide will use
@@ -140,7 +141,7 @@ This will generate an unique name/label for the collector install and Pods by ad
 
 Just make sure you use the correct label that is generated by the Helm chart if you wish to use the `helm` and `kubectl` commands from this workshop on an install done with the `--generate-name` option.
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+-->
 Use the label set by the `helm` install to tail logs (You will need to press `ctrl + c` to exit).
 
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content/en/tko/session-5/fix-apache.md

@@ -107,9 +107,13 @@ resources:
     memory: 12Mi
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-Save the changes youhave made. (Hint: Use `Esc` followed by `:wq!` to save your changes).
+Save the changes you have made.
+
+{{% notice title="Hint" style="info" icon="exclamation" %}}
+`kubectl edit` will open the contents in the `vi` editor, use `Esc` followed by `:wq!` to save your changes.
+{{% /notice %}}
 
-Because the StatefulSet is immutable, we must delete the existing Pod and let the StatefulSet re-create it with the new changes.
+Because StatefulSets are immutable, we must delete the existing Pod and let the StatefulSet re-create it with the new changes.
 
 ``` bash
 kubectl delete pod php-apache-0 -n apache