Fixed exercises and flow

Author: rcastley

content/en/s4r/9-custom-dashboard/1-custom-dashboard.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ As we already saved some useful log charts in a dashboard in the Log Observer ex
 ![log list](../images/log-charts.png?width=35vw)
 
 * Even if the log information is useful, it will need more information to have it make sense for our team so let's add a bit more information
-* The first step is adding a description chart to the dashboard. Click on the {{% button style="gray" %}}New text note{{% /button %}} and replace the text in the note with below with the text then click  the {{% button style="blue" %}}Save and close{{% /button %}}  button and name the chart **Instructions**
+* The first step is adding a description chart to the dashboard. Click on the {{% button style="grey" %}}New text note{{% /button %}} and replace the text in the note with the following text and then click the {{% button style="blue" %}}Save and close{{% /button %}} button and name the chart **Instructions**
 
 {{% notice title=" Information to use with text note" style="grey" %}}
 
@@ -28,14 +28,13 @@ For more detail visit [link](https://https://www.splunk.com/en_us/products/obser
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 * The charts are not in a nice order, let's correct that and rearrange the charts so that they are useful.
-* Move your mouse over the *Instruction* chart, your mouse pointer should change to a **☩**. This will allow you to drag a chart in the Dashboard. Drag the *Instruction* chart to the top left location and resize it to a 1/3rd of the page by dragging the left edge.
-* Drag and add the *Log Timeline view* chart next to the *Instruction* chart, resize it so it fills the other 2/3rd of the page
-to be the error rate chart next to the two the chart and resize it so it fills the page
+* Move your mouse over the top edge of the  *Instructions* chart, your mouse pointer will change to a **☩**. This will allow you to drag the chart in the dashboard. Drag the *Instructions* chart to the top left location and resize it to a 1/3rd of the page by dragging the right-hand edge.
+* Drag and add the *Log Timeline view* chart next to the *Instruction* chart, resize it so it fills the other 2/3rd of the page to be the error rate chart next to the two the chart and resize it so it fills the page
 * Next, resize the *Log lines* chart to be the width of the page and resize it the make it at least twice as long.
-
-You should have something similar to the dashboard below:
+* You should have something similar to the dashboard below:
 
 ![Initial Dashboard](../images/inital-dashboard.png)
 
-Already the dashboard is improved, let's continue and add more charts.
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+
+This looks great, let's continue and add more meaningful charts.

content/en/s4r/9-custom-dashboard/2-add-chart.md

@@ -10,20 +10,17 @@ In this section, we are going to use the **Copy and Paste** functionality to ext
 
 * Find your Service Health Dashboard.
 * Select the **2+** at the top of the page and select **Paste charts**, this will create the charts in your custom dashboard.
-<!--* Add `sf_environment:[WORKSHOPNAME]` and `sf_service:payment_service` to the override filter box. ( This will make sure the charts only show data for your workshop **paymentservice**).
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-* The chart currently shows data for all **Environments** and **Services**, so let's add a filter to our environment and the paymentservice.
+* The chart currently shows data for all **Environments** and **Services**, so let's add a filter for our **environment** and the **paymentservice**.
 * Click on the 3 dots **...** at the top right side of the **Request Rate** chart. This will open the chart in edit mode.
-* In the new screen, click on the {{% button style="blue" %}}sf_environment{{% /button %}} button (1) in the middle of the screen, and pick the [WORKSHOPNAME] from the drop-down. The button should change to **sf_environment:[WORKSHOPNAME]**
+* In the new screen, click on the {{% button style="blue" %}}sf_environment{{% /button %}} button (**1**) in the middle of the screen, and pick the [WORKSHOPNAME] from the drop-down. The button should change to **sf_environment:[WORKSHOPNAME]**
 * Do the same with the {{% button style="blue" %}}sf_service.{{% /button %}} button (2), only this time change it to `paymentservice`.
   ![edit chart](../images/edit-chart.png)
 * Click the {{% button style="blue" %}}Save and close {{% /button %}} button (**3**).
-* Click {{% button style="blue" %}}Save{{% /button %}}.
-* As the new pasted charts appeared at the bottom of our dashboard, we need to re-organize our dashboard gain.
+* As the new pasted charts appeared at the bottom of our dashboard, we need to re-organize our dashboard again.
 * First drag the *Log view* chart to the second row, between the *Instructions* chart and the *Log Lines* chart, and expand it to fill the row.
 * Resize the two new charts to be 1/3 of a row chart we just pasted, before moving them to the top row, so you have the *Instruction, Request Rate & Error Rate* chart taking up the top row.
   ![New dashboard look](../images/copyandpastedcharts.png)
-* Click the {{% button style="blue" %}}Save{{% /button %}} button again to keep th lates changes.
+* Click the {{% button style="blue" %}}Save{{% /button %}} button again to keep the lates changes.
 
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