Starting to add some polish

Author: rcastley

content/en/s4r/3-initial-tour/1-homepage/1-sign-in.md

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-This section will get you logged in and introduce you to the Splunk Observability Cloud UI.
-
 ### 1. Sign in to Splunk Observability Cloud
 
-You should have received an e-mail from Splunk inviting you to the Workshop Org (Org is short for Organization).  
-This e-mail will look like the one below, if you cannot find it please check your Spam/Junk folders, check our FAQ [here](99-login-faq) or inform your Instructor. Click the {{% button style="blue" %}}Join Now{{% /button %}} button or click on the link provided.
+You should have received an e-mail from Splunk inviting you to the Workshop Org. This e-mail will look like the screenshot below, if you cannot find it please check your Spam/Junk folders or inform your Instructor. To proceed click the **Join Now** button or click on the link provided in the e-mail.
+
+If you have already completed the registration process you can skip the rest and proceed directly to Splunk Observability Cloud:
+
+* [https://app.eu0.signalfx.com **(EMEA)**](https://app.eu0.signalfx.com)
+* [https://app.us1.signalfx.com **(APAC/AMER)**](https://app.us1.signalfx.com)
 
 ![email](../images/invite-email.png?width=25vw)
 
-If this is your first time using Splunk Observability Cloud, you will be presented with the registration form.
+If this is your first time using Splunk Observability Cloud, you will be presented with the registration form. Enter your full name, and desired password. Please note that the password requirements are:
 
-Enter your full name, and desired password (between 8 and 32 characters, containing at least one capital letter, one number, and one symbol) then click the checkbox to agree to the terms and conditions. After completing the form, click the {{% button style="blue" %}}SIGN IN NOW{{% /button %}} button.
+* Must be between 8 and 32 characters
+* Must contain at least one capital letter
+* Must have at least one number
+* Must have at least one symbol (e.g. !@#$%^&*()_+)
 
-![User-Setup](../images/enter-password.png?width=25vw)
+Click the checkbox to agree to the terms and conditions and click the **SIGN IN NOW** button.
 
-Let's continue our tour by visiting the Splunk Observability Cloud home page.
+![User-Setup](../images/enter-password.png?width=25vw)

content/en/s4r/3-initial-tour/_index.md

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-title: UI - Quick Tour
+title: UI - Quick Tour 🚌
 linkTitle: 3. UI - Quick Tour
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 archetype: chapter
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-A walkthrough of the various components of Splunk Observability Cloud showing you how to easily navigate the 5 main components:
+A short walkthrough of the various components of Splunk Observability Cloud to get you familiar with the UI.
 
-* **Application Performance Monitoring (APM)**
-* **Real User Monitoring (RUM)**
-* **Log Observer**
-* **Synthetics**
-* **Infrastructure Monitoring**
+1. **Signing in to Splunk Observability Cloud**
+2. **Real User Monitoring (RUM)**
+3. **Application Performance Monitoring (APM)**
+4. **Log Observer**
+5. **Synthetics**
+6. **Infrastructure Monitoring**