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_includes/gdi/auto-discovery-intro.rst

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 The Splunk Distribution of the OpenTelemetry Collector can automatically identify data sources and collect metrics and traces to send them to Splunk Observability Cloud. With automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation you don't need to manually configure the Splunk Distribution of the OpenTelemetry Collector or your applications before deploying them: 
 
-* Automatic discovery detects and collects signal data from third-party services, such as databases and web servers. To do so, the Collector automatically generates a configuration snipet that you can modify and incorporate into your existing configuration. 
+* Automatic discovery detects and collects signal data from third-party services, such as databases and web servers. Through auto discovery the Collector automatically generates a configuration snipet that you can modify and incorporate into your existing configuration to retrieve your services' data. 
 
-* With automatic discovery you can also enable zero-code instrumentation, which allows the Collector to retrieve data from application language runtimes without having to modify the source application code or adding any new installation or configuration steps. 
+* With automatic discovery you can also enable zero-code instrumentation, which allows the Collector to retrieve data from application language runtimes without having to modify the source application code or adding any new installation or configuration steps. With this option you won't have to install and configure your instrumentation agents separately. 
 
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gdi/opentelemetry/automatic-discovery/discovery-kubernetes.rst

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 .. _discovery-kubernetes:
 
 ************************************************************************
-Automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation for Kubernetes
+Automatic discovery for Kubernetes
 ************************************************************************
 
 .. meta:: 
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ Automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation for Kubernetes
 .. toctree::
     :hidden:
 
-    Zero-code instrumentation <k8s/k8s-backend>
-    Automatic discovery <k8s/k8s-third-party>
+    Language runtimes <k8s/k8s-backend>
+    Third-party applications <k8s/k8s-third-party>
     Advanced customization <k8s/k8s-advanced-config>
     k8s/k8s-java-traces-tutorial/about-k8s-java-traces-tutorial
 
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ Automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation for Kubernetes
 
     <h2>Get started</h2>
 
-To enable the zero-code instrumentation of back-end applications written in Java, Node.js, and .NET with the Collector without installing and configuring instrumentation agents separately see :ref:`k8s-backend-auto-discovery`. 
+To enable the Collector's zero-code instrumentation of back-end applications written in Java, Node.js, and .NET see :ref:`k8s-backend-auto-discovery`. With this option you won't have to install and configure your instrumentation agents separately. 
 
-To use the Collector's automatic discovery of third-party applications in Kubernetes environments see :ref:`k8s-third-party`.
+To use the Collector's automatic discovery of third-party applications in Kubernetes environments see :ref:`k8s-third-party`. With this option you'll only have to reuse a config file automatically generated by the Collector. 
 
 For a walkthrough of how to use automatic instrumentation to instrument an application in a Kubernetes environment, see :ref:`k8s-advanced-auto-discovery-config`.

gdi/opentelemetry/automatic-discovery/discovery-linux.rst

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 .. _discovery-linux:
 
 ************************************************************************
-Automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation for Linux
+Automatic discovery for Linux
 ************************************************************************
 
 .. meta:: 
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@ Automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation for Linux
 .. toctree::
     :hidden:
 
-    Zero-code instrumentation <linux/linux-backend>
-    Automatic discovery <linux/linux-third-party>
+    Language runtimes <linux/linux-backend>
+    Third-party applications <linux/linux-third-party>
     Advanced customization <linux/linux-advanced-config>
 
 .. include:: /_includes/gdi/auto-discovery-intro.rst
@@ -20,6 +20,6 @@ Automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation for Linux
 
     <h2>Get started</h2>
 
-To enable the Collector's zero-code instrumentation of back-end applications written in Java, Node.js, and .NET see :ref:`linux-backend-auto-discovery`. 
+To enable the Collector's zero-code instrumentation of back-end applications written in Java, Node.js, and .NET see :ref:`linux-backend-auto-discovery`. With this option you won't have to install and configure your instrumentation agents separately. 
 
-To use the Collector's automatic discovery and configuration of third-party applications in Linux environments see :ref:`linux-third-party`.
+To use the Collector's automatic discovery and configuration of third-party applications in Linux environments see :ref:`linux-third-party`. With this option you'll only have to reuse a config file automatically generated by the Collector. 

gdi/opentelemetry/automatic-discovery/discovery-windows.rst

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 .. _discovery-windows:
 
 ************************************************************************
-Automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation for Windows
+Automatic discovery for Windows
 ************************************************************************
 
 .. meta:: 
@@ -10,10 +10,14 @@ Automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation for Windows
 .. toctree::
     :hidden:
 
-    Zero-code instrumentation <windows/windows-backend>
+    Language runtimes <windows/windows-backend>
 
 .. include:: /_includes/gdi/auto-discovery-intro.rst
 
+.. raw:: html
+
+    <h2>Get started</h2>
+
 The Collector for Windows does not support automatic discovery of services.
 
-To enable the Collector's zero-code instrumentation of back-end applications written in .NET see :ref:`windows-backend-auto-discovery`.
+To enable the Collector's zero-code instrumentation of back-end applications written in .NET see :ref:`windows-backend-auto-discovery`. With this option you won't have to install and configure your instrumentation agents separately. 

gdi/opentelemetry/discovery-mode.rst

@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Automatic discovery of apps and services
 
 .. include:: /_includes/gdi/auto-discovery-intro.rst
 
-The following diagram shows how automatic discovery and zero-code instrumentation find data sources:
+The following diagram shows how automatic discovery finds data sources:
 
 .. mermaid::