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Co-authored-by: Alex Welsh <[email protected]>
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doc/source/operations/upgrading-openstack.rst

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From OpenStack 2025.1, Kayobe and Kolla-Ansible require Python 3.12.
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Ubuntu 24.04 has default Python of version 3.12.
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Ubuntu 24.04 has a default Python of version 3.12.
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You can find the upgrade procedure from :ref:`upgrading-to-ubuntu-noble`
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For Rocky Linux 9, install Python 3.12 manually.
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dnf install python3.12
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For both Operating Systems, Kayobe and Kolla-Ansible Python virtual environments
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created with older Python version will not work with OpenStack 2025.1.
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created with older Python versions will not work with OpenStack 2025.1.
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Create new Kayobe environment and bootstrap Ansible control host with Python 3.12.
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Beokay is recommended when creating and managing local Kayobe environment.
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You can find more information from :ref:`beokay` documentation.
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Create a new Kayobe environment and bootstrap the Ansible control host with Python 3.12.
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Beokay is recommended when creating and managing the local Kayobe environment.
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You can find more information from the :ref:`beokay` documentation.
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.. note::
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For Rocky Linux 9, ``beokay create`` need ``--python python3.12`` option
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to specify Beokay to use Python 3.12 as it is not the default.
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For Rocky Linux 9, ``beokay create`` must be used with the ``--python python3.12``
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option to specify Beokay to use Python 3.12 as it is not the default.
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Preparation
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release in case it is necessary before the upgrade begins.
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In general it is safer to rebuild an environment than upgrade. You can follow
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instructions from :ref:`beokay` documentation.
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instructions from the :ref:`beokay` documentation.
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But for completeness the following shows how to upgrade an existing local Kayobe
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environment.
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