Update StudentHealthTracking.md

Author: mmarum-sugarcrm

docs/StudentHealthTracking.md

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 View the **Cause of Death Report** and the **Student Health Report** by navigating to the Reports module and clicking 
 on the appropriate report title.
 
-## Common Student Injuries dashlet
-A new dashlet is available to track the number of times Students are injured over time. This dashlet leverages 
-the Contacts Audit table to populate a pie chart summarizing the number of times Students for in a given Super Group (or all Super Groups) enter a non-active Vital Status.
+## Student Body Problems dashlet
+A new dashlet is available to track the number of times Students encounter problems over time. This dashlet leverages 
+the Contacts Audit table to populate a pie chart summarizing the number of times Students for in a given Super Group (or all Super Groups) change to a non-active Vital Status. This will allow Professor M to track the sorts of issues that his students tend to run into over time.
 
 This dashlet displays use of the Sucrose charts in a custom dashlet and is available in Home, List Views, and Record Views.
 
-There is also an accompanying API endpoint for retrieve the data from the Student records and shows use of Doctrine QueryBuilder in a complex parameterized query that can't be created using SugarQuery APIs. For more information on the endpoint see <instnace>/rest/v11/help.
+There is also an accompanying API endpoint for retrieve the data from the Student records and shows use of Doctrine QueryBuilder in a complex parameterized query that can't be easily created using SugarQuery APIs. For more information on the endpoint see <instnace>/rest/v11/help.
 
 The pull request for the Student vitals dashlet can be viewed in [#27](https://github.com/sugarcrm/school/pull/27).