Merge pull request #433 from jeromekelleher/final-readthrough5

Final readthrough5

Author: jeromekelleher

paper.tex

@@ -335,8 +335,8 @@ \section{Genome ARGs}
 
 How nodes are interpreted, exactly, is application dependent.
 Following \citet{hudson1983properties}, we can view nodes
-as representing gametes, or we can imagine them representing
-the genomes present in cells immediately before or after
+as representing gametes, or we can imagine them representing,
+for example, the genomes present in cells immediately before or after
 some instantaneous event (Appendix~\ref{sec-cell-lineages-and-args}).
 A node can represent any genome along a chain of cell divisions
 or can be interpreted as representing one of the genomes of a
@@ -2476,7 +2476,7 @@ \section{Cell lineages and ARGs}
 % minimally simplified gARG.
 
 The schematic illustrates an important point about the biological reality of polytomies.
-Three linages coalesce in the left-hand genome of individual $D_{10}$, but do
+Three lineages coalesce in the left-hand genome of individual $D_{10}$, but do
 so as the result of two successive bifurcations. This is \emph{necessarily} so,
 because the only known method of reproducing DNA is by (semi-conservative) duplication.
 Whether this polytomy is resolvable depends on the available mutational data.