Update v10 & 13

Author: erikjanwestendorp

10/umbraco-cms/fundamentals/code/debugging/logging.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ keywords: logging serilog messagetemplates logs v9 version9
 
 In Umbraco we use the underlying logging framework of [Serilog](https://serilog.net/).
 
-Out of the box we write a JSON log file that contains a more rich logfile, that allows tools to perform searches & correlation on log patterns a lot easier.
+Out of the box, we write a JSON log file that contains a more detailed logfile. This allows tools to perform searches and correlations on log patterns more efficiently.
 
 The default location of this file is written to `umbraco/Logs` and contains the Machine name, along with the date too:
 
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Serilog is a logging framework that allows us to do structured logging or write
 2021-08-10 09:33:23,677 [P25776/D1/T22] INFO   Umbraco.Cms.Core.Services.Implement.ContentService - Document Home (id=1062) has been published.
 ```
 
-Here is an example of the same log message represented as JSON, you can see here we have much more information that would allow us to search & filter logs based on these properties with an appropriate logging system.
+Here is an example of the same log message represented as JSON. More information is available and allows you to search and filter logs based on these properties with an appropriate logging system.
 
 ```json
 {
@@ -46,13 +46,13 @@ Here is an example of the same log message represented as JSON, you can see here
 }
 ```
 
-To learn more about structured logging and message templates you can read more about it over on the [https://messagetemplates.org](https://messagetemplates.org) website or alternatively watch this video from the Serilog creator - [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhmNp8UPEEg](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhmNp8UPEEg)
+To learn more about structured logging and message templates you can read more about it over on the [https://messagetemplates.org](https://messagetemplates.org) website. Alternatively watch this video from the Serilog creator - [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhmNp8UPEEg](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhmNp8UPEEg)
 
 ## Writing to the log
 
-Umbraco writes log messages, but you are also able to use the Umbraco logger to write the log file as needed, so you can get further insights and details about your implementation.
+Umbraco writes log messages, but you are also able to use the Umbraco logger to write the log file as needed. This allows you to gain further insights and details about your implementation.
 
-Here is an example of using the logger to write an Information message to the log which will contain one property of **Name** which will output the name variable that is passed into the method
+Here is an example of using the logger to write an Information message to the log. It will contain one property, **Name**, which will output the name variable that is passed into the method.
 
 ```csharp
 using Microsoft.AspNetCore.Mvc;

13/umbraco-cms/fundamentals/code/debugging/logging.md

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 In Umbraco we use the underlying logging framework of [Serilog](https://serilog.net/).
 
-Out of the box we write a JSON log file that contains a more rich logfile, that allows tools to perform searches & correlation on log patterns a lot easier.
+Out of the box, we write a JSON log file that contains a more detailed logfile. This allows tools to perform searches and correlations on log patterns more efficiently.
 
 The default location of this file is written to `umbraco/Logs` and contains the Machine name, along with the date too:
 
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ Serilog is a logging framework that allows us to do structured logging or write
 2021-08-10 09:33:23,677 [P25776/D1/T22] INFO   Umbraco.Cms.Core.Services.Implement.ContentService - Document Home (id=1062) has been published.
 ```
 
-Here is an example of the same log message represented as JSON, you can see here we have much more information that would allow us to search & filter logs based on these properties with an appropriate logging system.
+Here is an example of the same log message represented as JSON. More information is available and allows you to search and filter logs based on these properties with an appropriate logging system.
 
 ```json
 {
@@ -48,13 +48,13 @@ Here is an example of the same log message represented as JSON, you can see here
 }
 ```
 
-To learn more about structured logging and message templates you can read more about it over on the [https://messagetemplates.org](https://messagetemplates.org) website or alternatively watch this video from the Serilog creator - [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhmNp8UPEEg](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhmNp8UPEEg)
+To learn more about structured logging and message templates you can read more about it over on the [https://messagetemplates.org](https://messagetemplates.org) website. Alternatively watch this video from the Serilog creator - [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhmNp8UPEEg](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhmNp8UPEEg)
 
 ## Writing to the log
 
-Umbraco writes log messages, but you are also able to use the Umbraco logger to write the log file as needed, so you can get further insights and details about your implementation.
+Umbraco writes log messages, but you are also able to use the Umbraco logger to write the log file as needed. This allows you to gain further insights and details about your implementation.
 
-Here is an example of using the logger to write an Information message to the log which will contain one property of **Name** which will output the name variable that is passed into the method
+Here is an example of using the logger to write an Information message to the log. It will contain one property, **Name**, which will output the name variable that is passed into the method.
 
 ```csharp
 using Microsoft.AspNetCore.Mvc;