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Co-authored-by: sofietoft <[email protected]>

Author: nikolajlauridsen

15/umbraco-cms/fundamentals/setup/upgrading/version-specific/README.md

@@ -23,14 +23,14 @@ Use the [general upgrade guide](../) to complete the upgrade of your project.
 
 * **Snapshots are removed**
 
-Snapshots has been removed, this means that any code that used `IPublishedSnapshot`, and by extension `IPublishedSnapshotAccessor`, must be updated. Inject `IPublishedContentCache` or `IPublishedMediaCache` and use those directly instead.
+Snapshots have been removed, meaning any code using `IPublishedSnapshot`, and by extension `IPublishedSnapshotAccessor`, must be updated. Inject `IPublishedContentCache` or `IPublishedMediaCache` and use those directly instead.
 
 * **Modelsbuilder models needs to be rebuilt**
 
-Models generated by ModelsBuilder used the `IPublishedSnapshot` interface, which has been removed. This means that the models needs to be rebuilt, the approach to this will differ on the models mode chosen:
+Models generated by ModelsBuilder used the `IPublishedSnapshot` interface, which has been removed. This means that the models need to be rebuilt. The approach to this will differ depending on the mode chosen:
 
-* InMemoryAuto - Remove the `umbraco\Data\TEMP\InMemoryAuto` folder, this will trigger a rebuild of the models.
-* SourceCodeAuto and SourceCodeManual - Remove the old models, by default these are located in the `\umbraco\models` folder, and then trigger a rebuild of the models from the dashboard in the backoffice.
+* InMemoryAuto - Remove the `umbraco\Data\TEMP\InMemoryAuto` folder to trigger a rebuild of the models.
+* SourceCodeAuto and SourceCodeManual - Remove the old models located in the `\umbraco\models` folder by default. Trigger a rebuild of the models from the ModelsBuilder dashboard in the backoffice.
 
 <summary>Umbraco 14</summary>