Write shorter sentences

Author: erikjanwestendorp

15/umbraco-cms/customizing/foundation/working-with-data/repositories.md

@@ -20,12 +20,12 @@ const repositoryManifest = {
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-With a repository we can have different data sources depending on the state of the app. It can be from a server, an offline database, a store, a Signal-R connection, etc. That means that the consumer will not have to be concerned how to access the data, add or remove items from a collection of items, etc. This means we get a loose connection between the consumer and the data-storing procedures hiding all complex implementation.
+With a repository we can have different data sources depending on the state of the app. It can be from a server, an offline database, a store, a Signal-R connection, etc. That means that the consumer will not have to be concerned how to access the data, add or remove items from a collection, etc. This means we get a loose connection between the consumer and the data-storing procedures hiding all complex implementation.
 
 ### Data flow with a repository <a href="#data-flow-with-a-repository" id="data-flow-with-a-repository"></a>
 
 <figure><img src="../../../.gitbook/assets/data-flow.svg" alt=""><figcaption><p>Data flow</p></figcaption></figure>
 
-A repository has to be instanced in the context where it is used. It should take a host element as part of the constructor, so any contexts consumed in the repository (notifications, modals, etc.) get rendered in the correct DOM context.
+A repository has to be instanced in the context where it is used. It should take a host element as part of the constructor. This ensures that any contexts consumed in the repository, like notifications or modals, are rendered in the correct DOM context.
 
 A repository can be called directly from an element, but will often be instantiated in a context, like the Workspace Context.