Update 15/umbraco-commerce/release-notes/v15.0.0-rc.md

Author: eshanrnh

15/umbraco-commerce/release-notes/v15.0.0-rc.md

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ For the most part the API should stay the same, the key different being changes
 
 ## Umbraco v15 updates
 
-As well as the async works, Umbraco Commerce v15 has also been updated to depend on Umbraco v15 which consists of the following updates.
+In addition to the asynchronous work, Umbraco Commerce v15 has been updated to depend on Umbraco v15, which includes the following updates:
 
 * Runs against .NET 9
 * Variants property editor supports content variants