Update permissions.md

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15/umbraco-commerce/tutorials/build-a-store/permissions.md

@@ -4,56 +4,58 @@ description: Configuring store permissions in Umbraco Commerce.
 
 # Configuring Store Permissions
 
-Configuring store permissions allows your to control who can access the store's management interface. 
+Configuring store permissions gives you control over who can access the store's management interface.
 
 The setup of store permissions is split into two parts:
 
-1. Allow access to the `Commerce` section
-2. Allow access to manage a store
+* [Allowing access to the `Commerce` section](#allow-access-to-the-commerce-section)
+* [Allowing access to manage a store](#allow-access-to-manage-a-store)
 
 ## Allow Access to the Commerce Section
 
-Store management is done through the `Commerce` section in the backoffice. To allow access to this section, you need to either create or update a user group and assign access to the `Commerce` section to it.
+Store management is done through the `Commerce` section in the backoffice. To allow access to this section, you need to either create or update a user group and assign access to the `Commerce` section.
 
-1. Navigate to the **Users** section of the backoffice
-2. Create a new user group or edit an existing one
-3. In the **Allowed Sections** property, select the `Commerce` section
+1. Navigate to the **Users** section of the backoffice.
+2. Create a new user group or edit an existing one.
+3. Find the **Allowed Sections** property.
+4. Select the `Commerce` section.
 
 ![Assign Commerce Allowed Section](../images/users/user-group.png )
 
-4. Click **Save** to save the changes to the user group
+4. **Save** the changes.
 
 ### Assign Users to the User Group
 
-After creating the user group, you can assign users to it to allow them access to the `Commerce` section.
+After creating the user group, you can assign users to it allowing them access to the `Commerce` section.
 
-1. Navigate to the **Users** section of the backoffice
-2. Edit the user you want to assign to the user group
-3. In the **Groups** property, select the user group you created earlier
+1. Navigate to the **Users** section of the backoffice.
+2. Edit the user you want to assign to the user group.
+3. Select the new user group in the **Groups** property.
 
 ![Assign Commerce User Group to User](../images/users/assign-user.png)
 
-4. Click **Save** to save the changes to the user
+4. **Save** the changes.
 
-After assigning the user to the user group, they will have access to the `Commerce` section in the backoffice.
+After assigning the user to the user group, they have the `Commerce` section in the backoffice.
 
 ![Commerce Section](../images/blendid/commerce_no_stores_highlight.png)
 
-At this point however, whilst your user has access to the commerce section, they will not yet be able to manage any stores and so a message is displayed guiding you of the next steps. To manage a store, you need to [allow access to manage a store](#allow-access-to-manage-a-store).
+At this point the user has access to the Commerce section, they will not yet be able to manage any stores. To give access to managing a store, you need to [allow access to manage a store](#allow-access-to-manage-a-store).
 
 ## Allow Access to Manage a Store
 
-To allow a user to manage a store, you need to assign store permissions from the stores settings.
+To allow a user to manage a store, you must assign store permissions from the store's settings.
 
 1. Navigate to the **Settings** section of the backoffice
-2. In the **Stores** area of the navigation, select the store you want to assign permissions to
-3. In the store editor, click the **Permissions** tab
+2. Open the **Stores** area.
+3. Select the store you want to assign permissions to.
+4. Click the **Permissions** tab in the Store editor.
 
 ![Store Permissions](../images/blendid/store_permissions.png)
 
-4. In the **User Roles** property, select the user group you created earlier
-5. Click **Save** to save the changes to the store
+5. Select the new user group in the **User Roles** property.
+6. **Save** the changes.
 
-After assigning the user group to the store, if we now open the `Commerce` section in the backoffice, users in that group will have access to manage the store.
+After assigning the user group to the store, users in that group can manage the store.
 
 ![Commerce Section](../images/blendid/commerce_with_store.png)