Update 17/umbraco-cms/fundamentals/setup/upgrading/version-specific/README.md

Author: eshanrnh

17/umbraco-cms/fundamentals/setup/upgrading/version-specific/README.md

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ For more details on this update see the following PR: [#19430](https://github.co
 
 The template and delivery API output segmented properties will perform an explicit fallback to the default segment, if they do not have a value.
 
-In earlier versions, if you created a segmented version of a document, you had to complete every property. This made segments an editorial burden unless the behavior was customized. With the new behavior, segmented content only needs properties that need a segmented value need to be completed.
+In earlier versions, if you created a segmented version of a document, you had to complete every property. This made segments an editorial burden unless the behavior was customized. With the new behavior, segmented content now only needs to have the properties that require a segmented value completed.
 
 For more details on this update see the following PR: [#20309](https://github.com/umbraco/Umbraco-CMS/pull/20309).