updating guidance to be clear 6

Author: kquinn1204

content/patterns/multicloud-gitops/mcg-demo-script.adoc

@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ The secret is `secret`
 
 === Customize the  web page
 
-make a small change to the `hello-world` application to see how the GitOps framework applies the change. 
+Make a small change to the `hello-world` application to see how the GitOps framework applies the change. 
 
 .Procedure
 

content/patterns/multicloud-gitops/mcg-getting-started.adoc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ include::modules/mcg-deploying-mcg-pattern.adoc[leveloffset=1]
 [id="next-steps_mcg-getting-started"]
 == Next steps
 
-After the management hub is set up and works correctly, attach one or more managed clusters to the architecture.
+After the management hub is set up and working correctly, attach one or more managed clusters to the architecture.
 
 For instructions on deploying the edge, refer to link:../mcg-managed-cluster/[Attach a managed cluster (edge) to the management hub].
 

modules/mcg-deploying-mcg-pattern.adoc

@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ gp2-csi   ebs.csi.aws.com   <none>
 gp3-csi   ebs.csi.aws.com   true
 ----
 +
-For more information about creating a dynamic `StorageClass`, see the https://docs.openshift.com/container-platform/latest/storage/dynamic-provisioning.html[Dynamic provisioning].
+For more information about creating a dynamic `StorageClass`, see the https://docs.openshift.com/container-platform/latest/storage/dynamic-provisioning.html[Dynamic provisioning] documentation.
 
 * Optional: A second OpenShift cluster for multicloud demonstration.
 //Replaced git and podman prereqs with the tooling dependencies page
@@ -230,9 +230,9 @@ The deployment will not take long but it should deploy successfully.
 Alternatively you can deploy the Multicloud GitOps pattern by using the command line script `pattern.sh`. 
 
 [id="deploying-cluster-using-patternsh-file"]
-== Deploying the cluster by using the pattern.sh file
+== Deploying the cluster by using the pattern.sh script
 
-To deploy the cluster by using the `pattern.sh` file, complete the following steps:
+To deploy the cluster by using the `pattern.sh` script, complete the following steps:
 
 . Log in to your cluster by running the following command:
 +