Adding SME review comments 2

Author: kquinn1204

content/patterns/federated-edge-observability/ansible-automation-platform.adoc

@@ -14,11 +14,9 @@ include::modules/comm-attributes.adoc[]
 
 === Logging in to the Ansible Automation Platform
 
-The default login user for the AAP interface is `admin, and the password is randomly generated during installation. This password is required to access the interface.
+The default login user for the AAP interface is `admin`, and the password is randomly generated during installation. This password is required to access the interface.However, logging into the interface is not necessary, as the pattern automatically configures the AAP instance. The pattern retrieves the password using the same method as the `ansible_get_credentials.sh` script (described below).
 
-However, logging into the interface is not necessary, as the pattern automatically configures the AAP instance. The pattern retrieves the password using the same method as the `ansible_get_credentials.sh` script (described below).
-
-If you need to inspect the AAP instance or modify its configuration, there are two ways to log in. Both methods provide access to the same instance using the same password.
+If you need to inspect the AAP instance or modify its configuration, there are two ways to log in. Both methods give access to the same instance using the same password.
 
 === Logging in using a secret retrieved from the OpenShift Console