Adding SME review comments 10

Author: kquinn1204

content/patterns/federated-edge-observability/ansible-automation-platform.adoc

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 aliases: /federated-edge-observability/aap/
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-:toc:
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 :imagesdir: /images
 :_content-type: ASSEMBLY
 include::modules/comm-attributes.adoc[]
 
 [id="ansible-automation-pattern"]
 == Logging in to the Ansible Automation Platform
 
-The default login user for the AAP interface is `admin`, and the password is randomly generated during installation. This password is required to access the interface. However, logging into the interface is not necessary, as the pattern automatically configures the AAP instance. The pattern retrieves the password using the same method as the `ansible_get_credentials.sh` script (described below).
+The default login user for the AAP interface is `admin`, and the password is randomly generated during installation. This password is required to access the interface. However, logging into the interface is not necessary, as the pattern automatically configures the AAP instance. The pattern retrieves the password by using the same method as the `ansible_get_credentials.sh` script (described below).
 
 If you need to inspect the AAP instance or modify its configuration, there are two ways to log in. Both methods give access to the same instance using the same password.
 
@@ -21,8 +21,7 @@ If you need to inspect the AAP instance or modify its configuration, there are t
 
 Follow these steps to log in to the Ansible Automation Platform using the OpenShift console:
 
-. In the OpenShift console, go to *Workloads* > *Secrets* and select the `ansible-automation-platform` project if you want to limit the number
-of secrets you can see.
+. In the OpenShift console, go to *Workloads* > *Secrets* and select the `ansible-automation-platform` project if you want to limit the number of secrets you can see.
 +
 .AAP secret
 image::/images/federated-edge-observability/ocp-console-secrets-aap-admin-password.png[federated-edge-observability-operators,title="AAP secret"]
@@ -34,16 +33,15 @@ image::/images/federated-edge-observability/ocp-console-secrets-aap-admin-passwo
 .AAP secret detail
 image::/images/federated-edge-observability/ocp-console-aap-admin-password-detail.png[federated-edge-observability-operators,title="AAP secret details"]
 
-. Under *Networking* > *Routes*, click the URL for `aap` route to open the Ansible Automation Platform interface. 
+. Under *Networking* > *Routes*, click the URL for the `aap` route to open the Ansible Automation Platform interface. 
 
-.. Log in using the `admin` user and the password you retrieved from the `aap-admin-password` secret. The following image shows the screen that appears after logging in
+.. Log in using the `admin` user and the password you retrieved from the `aap-admin-password` secret. The following image shows the screen that appears after logging in.
 +
 .AAP screen
 image::/images/federated-edge-observability/app-login.png[federated-edge-observability-operators,title="AAP screen"]
 
-
 [id="logging-in-using-secret-retrieved-using-script-ansible_get_credentials"]
-=== Logging in using secret retrieved using ansible_get_credentials.sh
+=== Logging in using a secret retrieved with ansible_get_credentials.sh
 
 Follow this procedure to log in to the Ansible Automation Platform using the `ansible_get_credentials.sh` script:
 
@@ -91,5 +89,4 @@ ok: [localhost] => {
 
 PLAY RECAP ***********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
 localhost                  : ok=7    changed=0    unreachable=0    failed=0    skipped=0    rescued=0    ignored=0   
-
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content/patterns/federated-edge-observability/getting-started.adoc

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 .federated-edge-observability-grafana
 image::/images/federated-edge-observability/FEO-grafana-plotted.png[federated-edge-observability-grafana,title="Federated Edge Observability displayed Graphs"]
 
-See link:/federated-edge-observability/ansible-automation-platform/[AnsibleAutomation Platform] for more information on how this pattern uses the
-Ansible Automation Platform Operator for OpenShift.
+See link:/federated-edge-observability/ansible-automation-platform/[AnsibleAutomation Platform] for more information on how this pattern uses the Ansible Automation Platform Operator for OpenShift.
 
 == Infrastructure Elements of this Pattern