Update src/installation/guides/arm-devices/platforms.md

Co-authored-by: classabbyamp <[email protected]>

Author: dkwo

src/installation/guides/arm-devices/platforms.md

@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ At the very least, install `base-system`, `asahi-base`, and an initramfs
 generator. By default, `asahi-uboot`, `grub-arm64-efi`, and `asahi-scripts`
 are also required, unless one changes initramfs or payload for m1n1.
 
-Void ships a kernel hook for m1n1, modeled upon Asahi upstream. This allows to
+Void ships a kernel hook for m1n1, modeled on Asahi upstream. This allows you to
 either just use m1n1, or use it in combination with uboot and grub (default) by
 setting the `PAYLOAD` variable (requires `asahi-uboot`, `grub-arm64-efi`). We
 ship tinyramfs config and hooks (to use, add `asahi` to `hooks`). The default is