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Merge pull request #2895 from w3c/editorial/move-mr-ref
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epub34/authoring/index.html

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[=package document=] is stored even though this is not a restriction defined in
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[[epub-rs-34]]. To avoid interoperability issues with these reading systems, it is advised
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to place all resources at or below the directory containing the package document.</p>
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<p>This problem is more commonly encountered when <a data-cite="epub-multi-rend-11#container"
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>creating multiple renditions</a> [[epub-multi-rend-11]] of the publication.</p>
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<p>Each rendition of the EPUB publication SHOULD only list the [=publication resources=] necessary for its
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rendering in its package document [=EPUB manifest | manifest=] [[epub-33]]. renditions MAY reference the
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rendering in its package document [=EPUB manifest | manifest=] [[epub-33]]. Renditions MAY reference the
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<h3>Reading system conformance</h3>
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<p>An EPUB reading system SHOULD determine the rendition to present to a user as defined in <a
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<p>This section describes the method by which reading systems locate the optimal [=rendition=] to
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<p>rendition selection SHOULD occur on initial rendering, and reading systems SHOULD re-evaluate the
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<p>Rendition selection SHOULD occur on initial rendering, and reading systems SHOULD re-evaluate the
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selection in response to changes in the user environment (e.g., change in device orientation or
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<p>This processing model does not require that the selection process occur on a user's device, or
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that all renditions be provided in the container. rendition selection could occur on the server
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that all renditions be provided in the container. Rendition selection could occur on the server
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<h3>Reading system conformance</h3>
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<p>Reading systems SHOULD support the use of [=rendition mapping documents=] to switch between content. </p>
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