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    </section><section id="description"><h2>Description</h2>
       <p>The objective of this technique is to provide audio descriptions through narration incorporated into the soundtrack of the synchronized video, so that people who cannot see are able to understand important visual material.</p>
       <p>Since most user agents today cannot merge multiple sound tracks, this technique adds additional context by revising the soundtrack so that the narration includes audio description via a single audio track. This additional information may address actions, characters, scene changes, and on-screen text (not captions) that are important to understanding the content.</p>
-      <p>The existing narrative is either revised or new narrative is added during pauses in existing dialogue (which potentially limits the amount of supplementary narration that can be added).</p>
+      <p>The narration is either revised or new narration is added during pauses in dialogue (which potentially limits the amount of supplementary narration that can be added).</p>
       <p>This technique is most appropriate in instructional, marketing, and other videos where the narrative is intended to be informational. In such cases, a soundtrack which reinforces the visual "takeaways" in the video will be vital to blind people and people with low vision, and may be of use to many users, including some users with cognitive disabilities.</p>
    </section><section id="examples"><h2>Examples</h2>
       <h3>An instructional video is scripted with narration that describes important visual content</h3>