docs(main): update proxy doc (#3747)

* docs(main): update proxy doc

* fix: comments

Author: caohuilin

packages/document/main-doc/docs/en/components/global-proxy.mdx

@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
-Modern.js provides out-of-the-box global proxy plugin `@modern-js/plugin-proxy`, which is based on [whistle](https://github.com/avwo/whistle) and can be used to view and modify HTTP/HTTPS requests and responses, and can also be used as an HTTP proxy server.
+Modern.js provides an out-of-the-box global proxy plugin `@modern-js/plugin-proxy`, which is based on [whistle](https://github.com/avwo/whistle) and can be used to view and modify the requests and responses of HTTP/HTTPS, as well as be used as an HTTP proxy server.
 
-### Set Proxy Rules
+### Setting Proxy Rules
 
-After install the proxy plugin and filling in the rules, execute `pnpm run dev`, Modern.js will automatically enable the proxy server after the development server starts.
+After installing the proxy plugin and configuring the rules, run `pnpm run dev`. Modern.js will automatically enable the proxy server when the development server is started.
 
 Specific proxy rules can be set via the [`dev.proxy`](/configure/app/dev/proxy) or the `config/proxy.js` file.
 
-### Use Proxy Dashboard
+### Proxy Dashboard
 
-After exec `pnpm run dev` command:
+After installing the proxy plugin and configuring the proxy rules, run the `pnpm run dev` command:
 
 ```bash
   App running at:
@@ -20,8 +20,8 @@ After exec `pnpm run dev` command:
 ✔  success   Proxy Server start on localhost:8899
 ```
 
-In the console you can see that the proxy server started successfully.
+You can see that the proxy server has started successfully in the console.
 
-Accessing the `http://localhost:8899` and, you can set the rules through the dashboard.
+Access `http://localhost:8899`, and you can set the rules through the dashboard.
 
 ![debug-proxy-ui](https://lf3-static.bytednsdoc.com/obj/eden-cn/aphqeh7uhohpquloj/modern-js/debug/debug-proxy-ui.png)

packages/document/main-doc/docs/en/guides/basic-features/proxy.mdx

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ sidebar_position: 5
 
 ## Local Proxy
 
-Modern.js provides a way to configure the development proxy in [tools.devServer](/configure/app/tools/dev-server). For example, to proxy the local interface to an online address:
+Modern.js provides a way to configure the development proxy in [`tools.devServer`](/configure/app/tools/dev-server). For example, to proxy the local interface to an online address:
 
 ```ts title="modern.config.ts"
 import { defineConfig } from '@modern-js/app-tools';
@@ -25,11 +25,10 @@ export default defineConfig({
 });
 ```
 
-when access `http://localhost:8080/go/api`, the response content is returned from [http://www.example.com/](http://www.example.com/).
+When access `http://localhost:8080/go/api`, the response content will be returned from [http://www.example.com/](http://www.example.com/).
 
 :::info
 For more detail, see [http-proxy-middleware](https://github.com/chimurai/http-proxy-middleware).
-
 :::
 
 ## Global Proxy
@@ -40,7 +39,7 @@ import GlobalProxy from "@site-docs-en/components/global-proxy"
 
 ## BFF Proxy
 
-By configuring [`bff.proxy`](/configure/app/bff/proxy), you can proxy BFF API requests to specified services. Unlike other proxy above, it can also be used in the production environment:
+By configuring [`bff.proxy`](/configure/app/bff/proxy), BFF API requests can be proxied to a specified service. Unlike the other proxy methods above, it can be used in the production environment:
 
 ```ts title="modern.config.ts"
 export default defineConfig({
@@ -52,7 +51,7 @@ export default defineConfig({
 });
 ```
 
-For example, when a BFF call is used in the code, the final request `http://localhost:8080/api/v1/topics` will auto proxy to `https://cnodejs.org/api/v1/topics`:
+For example, when using BFF function in the code, the final request `http://localhost:8080/api/v1/topics` will be automatically proxied to `https://cnodejs.org/api/v1/topics`:
 
 ```js
 import getTopics from '@api/v1/topics';