Address comments

Author: christhompson

fetch.bs

@@ -3291,7 +3291,7 @@ steps:
 
   <p class="note">This is a fallback request that shouldn't be upgraded again.
 
-  <li><p>Otherwise, upgrade the request by setting the following fields:
+  <li><p>Otherwise, set the following fields:
     <ul>
       <li>Set <code>https-upgrade-fallback-url</code> to <var>request</var>'s <a for="request">URL</a>.
       <li>Set <var>request</var>'s <a for="request">URL</a>'s <a for="url">scheme</a> to "<code>https</code>".
@@ -3309,11 +3309,7 @@ To run <dfn>HTTPS upgrade fallback</dfn> given a <a for=/>request</a>
   <li><p>If <var>request</var>'s <code>https-upgrade</code> flag is not set, return
   <var>response</var>.
 
-  <p class="note">This means <var>request</var> was not upgraded.
-
   <li>
-    <p class="note">The request was upgraded.
-
     <p>If <var>response</var> is a network error, run the following steps:
     <p class="note">This means that the upgrade failed and initiates a fallback load.
      <ol>
@@ -3322,7 +3318,9 @@ To run <dfn>HTTPS upgrade fallback</dfn> given a <a for=/>request</a>
       <li>Return <var>fallbackResponse</var>.
      </ol>
 
-  <li><p>Otherwise, the upgrade was successful. Return <var>response</var>.
+  <li>
+    <p class="note">The upgrade was successful.
+    <p>Return <var>response</var>.
 </ol>
 
 <p class=note>