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Author: carlosjoan91

fetch.bs

@@ -2122,7 +2122,7 @@ Unless stated otherwise, it is false.
 <p class=note>This flag is for exclusive use by HTML's render-blocking mechanism. [[!HTML]]
 
 <p>A <a for=/>request</a> has an associated boolean <dfn export for=request>https-upgrade</dfn>.
-Unless stated otherwise, it it false.
+Unless stated otherwise, it is false.
 
 <hr>
 
@@ -4408,10 +4408,11 @@ steps:
 
  <li><p><a>Upgrade <var>request</var> to a potentially trustworthy URL, if appropriate</a>.
 
- <li><p>If <var>request</var> is a <a>navigation request</a>, and <var>request</var>'s
- <a for=request>URL</a> is not a <a>potentially trustworthy URL</a>, optionally upgrade it to a
- <a>potentially trustworthy URL<a>. If <var>request</var> is upgraded, set <var>request</var>'s
- <a for=request>https-upgrade</a> flag to true.
+ <li><p>If <var>request</var> is a <a>navigation request</a> whose <a for=request>destination</a>
+ is "<code>document</code, <var>request</var>'s <a for=request>method</a> is <code>GET</code>,
+ and <var>request</var>'s <a for=request>URL</a> is not a <a>potentially trustworthy URL</a>,
+ optionally upgrade it to a <a>potentially trustworthy URL<a>. If <var>request</var> is upgraded,
+ set <var>request</var>'s <a for=request>https-upgrade</a> flag to true.
 
  <li><p><a>Upgrade a mixed content <var>request</var> to a potentially trustworthy URL, if appropriate</a>.
 
@@ -5233,7 +5234,7 @@ these steps:
   </ol>
 
  <li><p>If <var>response</var> is a <a>network error</a> and <var>request</var> has the
- <a>https-upgrades</a> flag set, set <var>request</var>'s <a for=/>URL</a> <a for=url>scheme</a>
+ <a>https-upgrade</a> flag set, set <var>request</var>'s <a for=/>URL</a> <a for=url>scheme</a>
  to <code>http</code> and set <var>response</var> to the result of running <a>HTTP-redirect fetch</a>
  given <var>fetchParams</var> and <var>response</var>.