Rewrite the Privacy Notice

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Rewrites privacy notice in static/consent.html for clarity and corrects a typo.

• Textual Changes:
  • Corrects typo "wether" to "whether" in static/consent.html.
  • Rephrases sentences for clarity in static/consent.html, such as changing "It is never sent elsewhere than to the local device" to "It is never sent anywhere other than to the local device".
  • Simplifies language, e.g., "your only course of action is to uninstall" to "your only option is to uninstall it".

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1. static/consent.html:21

• Draft comment:
  Fixed typo: changed 'wether' to 'whether'.
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2. static/consent.html:25

• Draft comment:
  Reworded info storage description for clarity.
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3. static/consent.html:30

• Draft comment:
  Improved consent policy text to be more direct and clear.
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4. static/consent.html:34

• Draft comment:
  Adjusted statement regarding core functionality; now clarifies that non-consent leads only to uninstallation.
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5. static/consent.html:21

• Draft comment:
  Good fix: Corrected typo 'wether' → 'whether'. Please ensure similar typo checks across all user-facing texts.
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6. static/consent.html:25

• Draft comment:
  Improved clarity: Using 'this information' and rewording the sentence for data storage reads more naturally.
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7. static/consent.html:30

• Draft comment:
  The revised sentence regarding Mozilla policy is clearer and more direct.
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8. static/consent.html:33

• Draft comment:
  The updated phrasing on the uninstallation requirement is clearer. Consider if a friendlier tone is appropriate to improve user experience.
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