Final few tweaks

Author: jhill1

coc.html

@@ -13,31 +13,34 @@ <h2>Code of Conduct</h2>
 
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-      <p>We value the participation of every member of our community and want to ensure an that every contributer has an 
-         enjoyable and fulfilling experience. Accordingly, everyone who participates in any 
-         Hill Environmental Modelling Lab project is expected to show respect and courtesy to other community members at all time.
-         We create our culture and our culture is inclusive.<p>
+      <p>We value the participation of every member of our community and want to ensure an that every contributor has an 
+	 enjoyable and fulfilling experience. Accordingly, everyone who participates in any Hill Environmental Modelling
+	 Lab project is expected to show respect and courtesy to other community members at all time. We create our
+	 culture and our culture is inclusive.<p>
 
       <h3>Outputs and open science</h3>
 
       <p>Where possible all outputs will be published as Open Access (preferably Gold or Diamond OA) and the submitted 
       manuscript be posted on a pre-print server (e.g. <a href="https://eartharxiv.org/">EarthArXiv</a>) prior to 
-      publication</a>. Where Gold OA is not possible, the manuscript should be made available
+      publication. Where Gold OA is not possible, the manuscript should be made available
       via Green OA and must be placed in the University of York's PURE system within three months of acceptance.</p>
 
-      <p> Authorship on any work will be openly discussed in lab meetings and should include everyone who contributed significantly to
-      the work being presented. Where conflict arises, Jon Hill will facilitate discussion to resolve the conflict.</p>
+      <p>Authorship on any work will be openly discussed in lab meetings and should include everyone who 
+	 contributed significantly to the work being presented. Where conflict arises, Jon Hill will facilitate
+	 discussion to resolve the conflict.</p>
 
-     <p>All computers should be backed up. A USB hard drive should be used as a daily, automated back-up, with regular backups
-         of important documents (e.g. model set-up files, manuscripts) to the lab group's google drive or the University servers.</p>
+     <p>All computers should be backed up. A set of two USB hard drives should be used as a daily automated back-up,
+        roated at regular intervals. Regular backup of important documents (e.g. model set-up files, manuscripts) 
+	to the lab group's google drive, the University's google drive or the University servers, preferably 
+	via a version control system, e.g. git.</p>
 
       <p>All data should be placed on an appropriate repository with a DOI and published alongside the manuscript wherever possible.
 	      Data includes. Suitable examples of repositories include <a href-"https://figshare.com/">FigShare</a> and 
 	      <a href="https://www.pangaea.de/about/">Pangaea</a>.</p>
 
-      <p>All software and scripts should be developed using Git or other suitable code versioning system, preferably in 
+      <p>All software and scripts should be developed using Git or other suitable code versioning system, ideally in 
 	      an open online environment, such as GitHub. Group members are free to add repositories to this group's or
-	      start their own. Code should be released under a suitable, permissive licence, such as LGPL if possible.
+	      start their own. Code should be released under a suitable, permissive licence, such as LGPL whenever possible.
 	Copyright of code developed lies with the University's of York for employees, but remains with the student on 
 	      their work and notices should be placed in all source code stating copyright owner and licence.</p>
 
@@ -55,8 +58,8 @@ <h3>Flexible working hours</h3>
       Automated emails, e.g. pull requests, github review request, etc are fine at any time, but no lab members are 
       required nor should feel obliged to reply to them outside of their typical work hours.</p>
 
-      <p>If you experience any challenges related to flexible working within the lab please contact Jon Hill. All communication 
-      will be treated as confidential.</p>
+      <p>If you experience any challenges related to flexible working within the lab please contact Jon Hill. 
+	All communication will be treated as confidential.</p>
 
       <h3>Inclusivity and diversity</h3>