Updated per Mia's suggestions.

Author: t-redactyl

src/content/pages/beginners-day.mdx

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 title: Beginners' Day
 url: /beginners-day
 subtitle:
-  This year we're hosting a special day for Python beginners.
+  This year we're hosting a special day for beginners.
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 ## EuroPython Beginners' Day
 
-On Saturday 19th July, we'll be hosting a day to help introduce people to Python and its applications which will feature three tracks running in parallel. The events are designed to welcome newcomers to the Python ecosystem, including a series of talks and panels by junior developers and two workshops designed to introduce complete beginners to web development and data science.
+On **Saturday 19th July**, we'll be hosting a day to help introduce people to programming and its applications, which will feature three tracks running in parallel. The events are designed to welcome newcomers to the Python ecosystem, including a series of talks and panels by junior developers and two workshops designed to introduce complete beginners to web development and data science.
 
-EuroPython Beginners' Day is open to everyone, from high school students or late career changers. Entry is free for EuroPython ticket holders, and €5 otherwise. Tickets for the Beginners' Day can be purchased here.
+EuroPython Beginners' Day is open to everyone, from high school students to late career changers. Entry is free for EuroPython ticket holders (any ticket type), and €5 otherwise. Tickets for the Beginners' Day can be purchased here.
 
 Please sign up for the Beginners' Day and the specific track you're interested in using [this form](https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSddM9RqRYc9jglmF-6vORbnFQ-_ymONU2cugUgB9poqqzLp5w/viewform?usp=dialog). The number of places available for each track is as follows:
-* **Beginners' Day panels and workshops**: X places
+* **Beginners' Day Unconference**: X places
 * **Django Girls**: X places
 * **Humble Data**: 18 places
 
-### Beginners' Day panels and workshops
+### Beginners' Day Unconference
 
-Beginners' Day panels and workshops are designed to help you start and grow your tech career. On the day, you'll be able to:
+The Beginners' Day Unconference is designed to help you start and grow your tech career. On the day, you'll be able to:
 * Attend panel discussions where junior developers share their real-world experiences, hiring managers explain what they look for in candidates, and experienced developers discuss the journey from junior to senior roles;
 * Participate in interactive workshops focused on practical skills for succeeding in your first tech job;
 * Join discussion circles that bridge perspectives between beginners and seasoned professionals;