docs: Korean Exiled Docs Update

[GoldenPig1205]

Spelling has been corrected and some content has been changed to make it more natural for locals.

Description

Describe the changes
Spelling has been corrected and some content has been changed to make it more natural for locals

Reuploaded due to mistake

What is the current behavior? (You can also link to an open issue here)

What is the new behavior? (if this is a feature change)

Does this PR introduce a breaking change? (What changes might users need to make in their application due to this PR?)

Other information:

Types of changes

• Bug fix (non-breaking change which fixes an issue)
• New feature (non-breaking change which adds functionality)
• Breaking change (fix or feature that would cause existing functionality to change)
• Documentations

Submission checklist

• I have checked the project can be compiled
• I have tested my changes and it worked as expected

Patches (if there are any changes related to Harmony patches)

• I have checked no IL patching errors in the console

Other

• Still requires more testing

[louis1706]

Does someone that speak this language can confirm the changed ?

[Cocoa2219]

confirmed