rewording III

Author: odeimaiz

services/static-webserver/client/source/class/osparc/info/MergedLarge.js

@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ qx.Class.define("osparc.info.MergedLarge", {
           qx.event.message.Bus.getInstance().dispatchByName("updateStudy", studyData);
         })
         .catch(err => {
-          const msg = this.tr("There was an issue while updating the information.");
+          const msg = this.tr("An issue occurred while updating the information.");
           osparc.FlashMessenger.logError(err, msg);
         });
     }

services/static-webserver/client/source/class/osparc/info/ServiceLarge.js

@@ -575,7 +575,7 @@ qx.Class.define("osparc.info.ServiceLarge", {
           this.fireDataEvent("updateService", this.getService());
         })
         .catch(err => {
-          const msg = this.tr("There was an issue while updating the information.");
+          const msg = this.tr("An issue occurred while updating the information.");
           osparc.FlashMessenger.logError(err, msg);
         })
         .finally(() => this.setEnabled(true));

services/static-webserver/client/source/class/osparc/info/StudyLarge.js

@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@ qx.Class.define("osparc.info.StudyLarge", {
           }
         })
         .catch(err => {
-          const msg = this.tr("There was an issue while updating the information.");
+          const msg = this.tr("An issue occurred while updating the information.");
           osparc.FlashMessenger.logError(err, msg);
         });
     }

services/static-webserver/client/source/class/osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js

@@ -34,13 +34,13 @@ qx.Class.define("osparc.metadata.ServicesInStudyUpdate", {
         versionLabel.set({
           textColor: "text-on-warning", // because the background is always yellow
           backgroundColor: osparc.service.StatusUI.getColor("deprecated"),
-          toolTipText: qx.locale.Manager.tr("Service deprecated, please update")
+          toolTipText: qx.locale.Manager.tr("This service is deprecated. Please update.")
         });
       } else if (isRetired) {
         versionLabel.set({
           textColor: "text-on-warning", // because the background is always red
           backgroundColor: osparc.service.StatusUI.getColor("retired"),
-          toolTipText: qx.locale.Manager.tr("Service retired, please update")
+          toolTipText: qx.locale.Manager.tr("This service has been retired. Please update.")
         });
       }
     }
@@ -66,16 +66,16 @@ qx.Class.define("osparc.metadata.ServicesInStudyUpdate", {
         .then(resp => {
           const services = resp["services"];
           if (osparc.study.Utils.getCantExecuteServices(services).length) {
-            msg += this.tr("Some services are not accessible. Please contact service owner:");
+            msg += this.tr("Some services are inaccessible. Please contact the service owner:");
             msg += "<br><br>";
           }
           if (osparc.study.Utils.anyServiceRetired(services)) {
-            msg += this.tr("Services marked in red are retired: you cannot use them anymore.");
+            msg += this.tr("Services marked in red are retired and can no longer be used.");
             if (canIWrite) {
               msg += "<br>" + this.tr("If the Update button is disabled, they might require manual intervention to be updated:");
               msg += "<br>- " + this.tr("Open the study");
               msg += "<br>- " + this.tr("Click on the retired service, download the data");
-              msg += "<br>- " + this.tr("Upload the data to an updated version");
+              msg += "<br>- " + this.tr("Upload the data to a newer version");
             }
             msg += "<br><br>";
           }
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ qx.Class.define("osparc.metadata.ServicesInStudyUpdate", {
             msg += this.tr("All services are up to date to their latest compatible version.");
             msg += "<br>";
           } else if (canIWrite) {
-            msg += this.tr("Use the Update buttons to bring the services to their latest compatible version.");
+            msg += this.tr("Click Update to upgrade services to the latest compatible version.");
             msg += "<br>";
           } else {
             msg += this.tr("Some services are not up to date.");

services/static-webserver/client/source/class/osparc/store/Services.js

@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ qx.Class.define("osparc.store.Services", {
     },
 
     getInaccessibleServicesMsg: function(inaccessibleServices, workbench) {
-      let msg = qx.locale.Manager.tr("Some services are not accessible:<br>");
+      let msg = qx.locale.Manager.tr("Some services are inaccessible:<br>");
       Object.values(workbench).forEach(node => {
         const inaccessibleService = inaccessibleServices.find(srv => srv.key === node.key && srv.version === node.version);
         if (inaccessibleService) {

services/static-webserver/client/source/class/osparc/study/BillingSettings.js

@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ qx.Class.define("osparc.study.BillingSettings", {
       if (myWallets.find(wllt => wllt === wallet)) {
         // It's my wallet
         this._createChildControlImpl("debt-explanation").set({
-          value: this.tr("Top up the Credit Account:<br>Purchase additional credits to bring the Credit Account balance back to a positive value.")
+          value: this.tr("Top up the Credit Account:<br>Purchase additional credits to restore a positive balance.")
         });
         const buyCreditsButton = this._createChildControlImpl("buy-credits-button");
         buyCreditsButton.addListener("execute", () => this.__openBuyCreditsWindow(), this);

services/static-webserver/client/source/translation/en.po

@@ -1435,7 +1435,7 @@ msgid "Unable to fetch Services"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/store/Services.js
-msgid "Some services are not accessible:<br>"
+msgid "Some services are inaccessible:<br>"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/dashboard/StudyBrowser.js
@@ -2063,7 +2063,7 @@ msgid "Edit Description"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/info/MergedLarge.js
-msgid "There was an issue while updating the information."
+msgid "An issue occurred while updating the information."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/info/StudyLarge.js
@@ -2139,7 +2139,7 @@ msgid "You don't have access to the last used Credit Account"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/study/BillingSettings.js
-msgid "Top up the Credit Account:<br>Purchase additional credits to bring the Credit Account balance back to a positive value."
+msgid "Top up the Credit Account:<br>Purchase additional credits to restore a positive balance."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/study/BillingSettings.js
@@ -2279,19 +2279,19 @@ msgid "New Tag"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js
-msgid "Service deprecated, please update"
+msgid "This service is deprecated. Please update."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js
-msgid "Service retired, please update"
+msgid "This service has been retired. Please update."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js
-msgid "Some services are not accessible. Please contact service owner:"
+msgid "Some services are inaccessible. Please contact the service owner:"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js
-msgid "Services marked in red are retired: you cannot use them anymore."
+msgid "Services marked in red are retired and can no longer be used."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js
@@ -2307,7 +2307,7 @@ msgid "Click on the retired service, download the data"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js
-msgid "Upload the data to an updated version"
+msgid "Upload the data to a newer version"
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js
@@ -2323,7 +2323,7 @@ msgid "All services are up to date to their latest compatible version."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js
-msgid "Use the Update buttons to bring the services to their latest compatible version."
+msgid "Click Update to upgrade services to the latest compatible version."
 msgstr ""
 
 #: osparc/metadata/ServicesInStudyUpdate.js